Reviews for Mrs Richard B Riddick
DemonicAngel chapter 16 . 9/13
I can't believe there isn't another chapter. This story needs to continue. It is so good. Please keep on writing. Why do the good stories always end unfinished? Please update please.
Guest chapter 16 . 8/21
I wish you'd finish this story! It's amazing so far!
Faery66 chapter 16 . 6/28
Hope to read more soon.

Heather chapter 16 . 5/16
I know its been years but i really want to know what happens
ZurEnAarh chapter 1 . 4/13
I love this story! i hope you update soon!
SleepPatterns chapter 14 . 1/1
This is suuuuuuch a good fucking story, dude. I really hope you decide to pick this story back up because I gotta know how this ends! Happy new year! xx
Anna Miller1 chapter 16 . 12/26/2017
I have read a ton of Riddick stories. This is the most amazing one. This is my first review ever and I want to motivate you to keep writing.
RomanticBlondie chapter 16 . 12/19/2017
THis is such a great story!
Ghost Wolf 114 chapter 16 . 11/15/2017
Don't give up yet! You can do it
Riddicks-gurl1988 chapter 16 . 9/17/2017
I love the story but thry really need to talk and stop holding things back thats why they fight and fuss for no reason. Riddick hopefully next chalter tells her that the Company fucked him over amd he didnt want them coming for her so he stayed away, and she needs to tell him that the only reason she wants a divorvce is because she thought he abandoned her. Also she beeds to get over the fact about Riddicks behavior he was like that before just not as upfront mean but if you love the man you get over the corks
Guest chapter 16 . 9/15/2017
I agree with what the guest that writes, Marty is not a wimp. I think your story is amazing. Please add more to chapter 16 and more chapters.
Guest chapter 16 . 9/11/2017
Dear Guest below me,
I don't think Marty is being a wimp at all. If she was one, she wouldn't have actively seeked Riddick out and would've just settled with him leaving for so long. Also it's hard to see someone that you love change into something that is different from what you know. Riddick is obviously not the same man anymore, therefore she was going through a hard initial shock. I loved the fact that we got 4-5 chapters on Marty because we got the chance to actually know Marty for who she is and the connection the two of them made. It's better than the author just writing how badass Marty is all the time and how she doesn't take shit at all. That doesn't give a real individual, Marty is someone that many can identify with. She's fallen in love with someone that she can't recognize anymore, but the beautiful connection is still there. I honestly read this story every day out of pure enjoyment and I try to see if I missed something because the author has wrote it with such depth. This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more- SJ
Guest chapter 16 . 9/11/2017
Marty is getting very annoying. First, the major breakdown of her's which took like 4 to 5 chapters for her to resolve and now her just jumping to conclusions and misunderstanding riddick. I'd prefer a badass over a wimp.
SpringBorn chapter 16 . 8/29/2017
I feel so bad for Marty...I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
RandomCitizen chapter 16 . 8/28/2017
Heh, I remember as a kid I asked my mom for a sip of her soda...turned out to have some liquor in it and she laughed at me. ;( Said stuff on how I might be less inclined to drink then, and stuff. ( the betrayal...!) Now I always ask what is in whatever she offers me.(to which she rolls her eyes) 'XP

I think a good sleep will do everyone good. Shame that they are unlikely to get it. :P
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