|Reviews for Mrs Richard B Riddick|
| Riddicks-gurl1988 chapter 16 . 9/17
I love the story but thry really need to talk and stop holding things back thats why they fight and fuss for no reason. Riddick hopefully next chalter tells her that the Company fucked him over amd he didnt want them coming for her so he stayed away, and she needs to tell him that the only reason she wants a divorvce is because she thought he abandoned her. Also she beeds to get over the fact about Riddicks behavior he was like that before just not as upfront mean but if you love the man you get over the corks
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/15
I agree with what the guest that writes, Marty is not a wimp. I think your story is amazing. Please add more to chapter 16 and more chapters.
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/11
Dear Guest below me,
I don't think Marty is being a wimp at all. If she was one, she wouldn't have actively seeked Riddick out and would've just settled with him leaving for so long. Also it's hard to see someone that you love change into something that is different from what you know. Riddick is obviously not the same man anymore, therefore she was going through a hard initial shock. I loved the fact that we got 4-5 chapters on Marty because we got the chance to actually know Marty for who she is and the connection the two of them made. It's better than the author just writing how badass Marty is all the time and how she doesn't take shit at all. That doesn't give a real individual, Marty is someone that many can identify with. She's fallen in love with someone that she can't recognize anymore, but the beautiful connection is still there. I honestly read this story every day out of pure enjoyment and I try to see if I missed something because the author has wrote it with such depth. This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more- SJ
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/11
Marty is getting very annoying. First, the major breakdown of her's which took like 4 to 5 chapters for her to resolve and now her just jumping to conclusions and misunderstanding riddick. I'd prefer a badass over a wimp.
| SpringBorn chapter 16 . 8/29
I feel so bad for Marty...I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
| RandomCitizen chapter 16 . 8/28
Heh, I remember as a kid I asked my mom for a sip of her soda...turned out to have some liquor in it and she laughed at me. ;( Said stuff on how I might be less inclined to drink then, and stuff. ( the betrayal...!) Now I always ask what is in whatever she offers me.(to which she rolls her eyes) 'XP
I think a good sleep will do everyone good. Shame that they are unlikely to get it. :P
| Heaven-water-sister chapter 16 . 8/27
feels loved it though.
| FlowerChild23 chapter 16 . 8/26
Aww so sweet
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/22
I can't wait to see what happened to Marty while Riddick was gone. I'm also wondering what happened to Tina, since she's definitely not with Marty. You are doing a great job!
| called by the wind chapter 15 . 8/21
Great chapter thank you!
| RandomCitizen chapter 15 . 8/20
Misbehaving in front of the lady-love. Heh.
| Wandering Mage011 chapter 15 . 8/19
I just found this a few days ago, after rewatching the movies and I’ve got to say that I love it.
It’s not the basic retelling with a new character. There’s a long history and a ton of emotions between these two, both of which are deeply entwined with what makes Marty and Riddick who they are.
Your writing really makes Marty and Riddick feel three dimensional, and a not a lot of writers can do that. (Not to mention how hard it can be to write someone like Riddick)
Thanks for the lovely update into Riddick’s thought process, I’m already looking forward to reading the next one.
| belly bells cullen- salvatore chapter 15 . 8/19
I love itttt
| Heaven-water-sister chapter 15 . 8/19
lol loved this.
| FlowerChild23 chapter 15 . 8/19
Lol poor Girl