Reviews for The Awaited Christmas
KuronoHi chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
*Yaoi senses go wild* AAAAAHHH! MORE! :D
"Your heartbeats are wild, Jinguuji" Masato said, gently placing a hand at Ren's chest.

"Speak for yourself, Jinguuji," the blond teased, "I can hear yours loud and clear."
That was one thing I found...I think you meant to say Masato.
That and it's 'discrete' not 'discreete' :P
These are awesome! Keep it up!

Kuro
Deco-sama chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Aw, this was sweet. You're not a bad writer either. Write more soon, k?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Aw that was so beutiful, I'm sitting here with teary eyes. Your so talented, really!
But what do you mean by no next time?
vanillemilkshake chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
how sweet :')))))