|Reviews for Love Bites|
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
I like it! **
| tsunasoraceillover chapter 3 . 2/28/2014
Awwwwww this is amazing
| KuroiSpade chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
nice! i love it XDd
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
Well, that was a very interesting story, I also really liked the way you wrapped it up too. They've grown from the experience, nevertheless, even if they aren't in the same relationship as was shown during the time after Tokyo. And that's not necessarily a bad thing.
Great way of developing the story, I can sort of see that happening. The mark of a great writer can be found when two people you wouldn't even consider together somehow fit in the realms of another alternative, from one stemmed choice.
| Skittles Pie chapter 3 . 1/4/2013
T.T *applaudes* I'm so happy you were able to make something out of my story suggestion, and I truly enjoyed this as well :') I think the way you left it open-ended at the end is really believable, so great job with that Also, you appealed to one of my kinks (sadly, I like bdsm...), so great, great job! :D
| Green Sphynx chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
I like this story very much
Though, on one detail: he bit his tongue, but it didn't bleed much. Now I'm not an expert by experience, but ever since I was allowed to use a knife while eating my parents have been exceptionally strict on the rule of never ever putting a knife in your mouth, because cutting your tongue is very dangerous. First, it bleeds like crazy because it is the strongest muscle of the body and therefore has many blood vessels. Secondly, it doesn't stop bleeding because it's protected from the air in a moist place, so no scabs will be able form. (Thirdly the infections you can get are very nasty with it being in your mouth and all, but that's not to the point for this fic)
Now you did mention vampire saliva healing wounds faster, so I will acknowledge kissing a vampire will be the best way to avoid bleeding to death after biting your tongue, but I'm still not sure about a tongue not bleeding much, no matter how shallow the wound.
But apart from that bit of hair-splitting, I can't wait for the next chapter :D
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Meant to review the first chapter, but I might as well just stuff it all in here.
Ahem, very well done. Your characterizations are spot on, as per usual. I like how you described Kurogane's eyes in the last chapter. 'Wine red'...that's a cool f description. Most people might say blood-red. I also liked the last section with Fai outside on the roof. I really connected with what he was going through at that point, and it was very engaging.
As for this chapter, I liked how it developed things further as far as their relationship. However, I sort of couldn't comprehend Sakura's actions in this. It seemed sort of odd...not that it's that important, she's a minor character. I just didn't understand why she was behaving that way...*shrugs* more personal reaction than anything else.
As for Syaoran he's classically tragic as you seem good at making him that way. His actions at the end surprised me, well played.
Anyway, great couple of chapters.
| Skittles Pie chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Lalalalala I'm in love with this story
It's got everything that I wasn't able to put into my version of it, well, my version was supposed to be wayyyyyyyyyyyyy longer (tell that to the measly four pages on the document -.-'). Still, like I said, loving your story Tonight-chan is the best! ()（‐‐)
| Skittles Pie chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I love youuuuuuuuuuuu! 3 My favorite author forever is Tonight-chan! X3 I'm so glad that my idea was inspiring :3 Please update the next parts soon
| lonely white cloud chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I know this sound weird, but can Syaoran top?