|Reviews for Aim to Please|
| CarolynStoddardMoretz chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
Good god this is intense. Forget your character Piper, I think you someday will be a famous horror novelist. How in the world did you get the idea to do this as a fan fiction? I'm totally freaked out by you, nonetheless it is a great story.
| frannyfry chapter 17 . 9/8/2013
Holy hell! Damien is nuts! I say let James kick his ass...that'd be hot. Oh, um, sorry...anyway, poor Logan stuck as Damien's new toy for a few days?! Ugh!
Hey! Damien, aka, asshole, messed up my pretty one! Was that really necessary?! Not the face, man. God!
Ok, I held up fine until it was James getting fucked with! Now I want BLOOD! Damien better die a SLOW and PAINFUL death...I'm showing my Italian now dammit!
James Jesus Diamond?! Really? That's hilarious! Damn! I love how they are harassing each other in the hospital. LOL
James, Baby, you ARE the honey! The ENTIRE convo in the hospital b/t James and Logan had me cracking up! OMG too funny!
Poor Lucy & Kendall...argh!
Dude! She hit Carlos! Oh NO! There's Kendall! Yea!
Go Logan! Ya big stud! LOL YES! Everyone is safe -thank God! Great ending. It all works out...eventually. Thanks for the escape! :-)
| frannyfry chapter 9 . 9/7/2013
Good ok' Gustavo...always up for making a buck! LOL
I'm a thriller/horror queen so I'm alright with the psycho torturing the people. Its a trip in a freaky good way! :-)
Poor Carlos, trying to be the good gy and look where it gets him...all fur some damn fruit snacks. :-(
That clown bit was freaky! Penny Wise scares the hell outta me. Logan makes a great studly hero. Nicely done.
Awwwww, Gustavo has a heart. He needs his Dogs. Whatta guy. ;-)
Holy hell this guy's a flipping' psycho! Hope her dad's ok. What the hell us he gonna do with Logan?! Suspense us great and killing me at the same time!
| frannyfry chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
Oooohhhhh, sounds interesting! Can't wait! Headed to Ch 2...
| LazyLazyWriter chapter 17 . 2/24/2013
| Emy.Elle phone chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
ok..so i tried to read..but i got as far as 'lovely manechiure' and chickened out..forgive me?!
I can not do torture or i'll never sleep again! *runs to hide under biggest rock this chicken can find*
| winterschild11 chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Great ending to a great story!
| oooooooooooooooooooooooooo chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Awww this was super cute and fluffy! I don't care how long it took, it was a realltly great ending that made my heart swell. I meam they went through A LOT, it was nice to have a relaxing ending. Haha I so laughed at the ramen part and awwed so many times. And when Katie kissed Kendall's scar, ahhh there are to describe that...precious maybe although I do reserve that word for Carlos. Ahh I really enjoyed this :) And I'm sad to see it end, but kinda happy too lol. And just yeah, amazing job!
| lazylazywriter chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
Yay :) Logan is a badass! Love it !
| oooooooooooooooooooooooooo chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
OMG I knew as soon as I saw the chapter title that it was gonna be good but...WHOA! Woo-Hoo finally! Ahh it sucks that everybody got beat up but mad props to Logan, he is the hero! Lmao at picturing Tom'slame ass being dragged into a police car handcuffed, I hope they slam his head trying to gethim in and then shut his leg in the door. I am smiling SO big right now but here's the milliin dollar question...is it over?
| winterschild11 chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
Yay! they got the freakin perv!
| LazyLazyWriter chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
Get him Carlos!
| oooooooooooooooooooooooooo chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
:O Good God! Oh man I'm in shock here wondering what the hell is gonna hppen next! I hope Lucy and Kendall are okay! And btw, the whooe lesbo cinvo had me cracking up, he is one conceited bastard but he's right about one thing...he is the honey! Now I:m suoer excited for the next chapter
| winterschild11 chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
James is hilarious!
| oooooooooooooooooooooooooo chapter 14 . 1/13/2013
Awww, such a crappy thing these kids are going through! Oh gosh I hope Damien doesn't do anymore damage, but I wonder what that sick fuck has planned...obviously he wants to kill them all, no bueno!