Reviews for Design Your Universe
taidoton chapter 5 . 6/17
I have to admit that this is the first time I've bothered to review anything. Your plots are unique and set apart from the masses, characters have actual personalities and there are no glaring grammatical errors. I would love to see updates on this story.
Greyline chapter 5 . 9/21/2017
I haven't a clue why you seem to believe your works are anything but imaginative, enjoyable and surprisingly fresh in general. I can see that you, as I, suffer from a somewhat procrastinatory nature but... what you *have* finished and gotten out is mostly of a very high calibre. Or... that might just be me envying your constant straightforwardness again.

I love your OCs. It's so hard to flesh out OCs and yours have great personalities - they have proper, ingrained likes and dislikes, things to do, and Harry's interaction with them is natural. Actually, all your dialogue is pretty natural - far cry from some of the more formal, stunted dialogue many use in their work.

Would be great to see what's going on back on Earth. This is another interesting AU from you, so I'll just go with the flow on it and try not to speculate about how wizarding society is as a whole in this fic. You'd probably only end up surprising me and proving me wrong anyway, lol.

Also, this headmaster seems like a douche from the off. There's always *one*, right? One member of staff/person in a group who insists on ruining everything by being a damn miser (in my group, it's *me*).

Anyway, another time...
:)
Luc chapter 5 . 9/15/2017
I see this is from Harrys pov, but I would really like to know how are things back home. Its like an itch, taking a lot of mu attention. Hard to concentrate reading about this new universe. Too bad Tom only comes in chapter ten. This is mellowing out. While this new universe is interesting, its not nearly on the same level with the au!Canon left behing overall. Too many new creatures and honestly, I like harry and the potterverse. So if you want to keep this interesting, think about doing something.
erikabalaclava chapter 5 . 8/5/2017
I liked! I hope it comes out in a future Tom.
Rayne G chapter 5 . 6/17/2017
loving this fic , please please write more!
Solaria Sunstone chapter 5 . 5/28/2017
This is really well written. Surprisingly enough, I really like your OCS and their characterisations. I can't wait to read more and see how the plot develops! xxx
ObliviousFanatic chapter 5 . 4/3/2017
Poor lonely Harry... Can't wait until the next chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/23/2017
Loved the fic, thanks for sharing it, it's really original with how you've built the characters!
LunaSunFlowerLily chapter 5 . 2/18/2017
Thanks for the update
Spinnerofdark chapter 5 . 2/13/2017
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hotcat chapter 5 . 2/11/2017
I wonder why vampires want to kill Harry. Is Bella Harys babysitter? :)
Dracowoman chapter 3 . 2/11/2017
I feel that I should point at a plot hole in that harry did apologize with "sorry" to the draconian
Lilyth369 chapter 5 . 2/11/2017
I love this story, I think it's great. Of course I want to read more and more. The plot, the characters, I love the way you write.

I must confess that I cried a lot when James repudiated Harry, it hurts me to throw him into the streets with nothing but his talent. Which fortunately is enough, but it hurts me so much, I wonder if James misses it, if he is sorry.

And the personality of Harry is the maximum, I can not wait to read more of this universe and the people that make it up. I hope you are very well and keep you full of inspiration. 3
notsofrilly chapter 5 . 2/11/2017
When the elf said, "As all teachers worth their salt, I'm a true martyr" I immediately thought of Sebastian. "As a butler of the phantomhives." "I'm merely one hell of a butler"
Carottal chapter 5 . 2/11/2017
Your mind is not sick. Your mind is wonderfully creative to come up with all these loveable characters and all the details that make this story. Such as weakness and strength for a vampire and dryad, or new drinks because we're in a new universe. Your universe lives. It has its traditions, its rules, its workings. Or at least it feels as such to me.

But most of all, your characters live. I don't know if it's an illusion but you seem to know so much more about your characters than what is written, their relations with other people, their likes and dislikes, their fears... It gives them life and depth. They look independent from Harry, able to live without him. And that is awesome!
I also love how you set the scenes to present your characters.

I will not talk about that dream in the beginning and the thoughts that went with it, I won't. But damn, it was nice and I am curious about what happened to Harry's stepmother. Very curious.

I loved that talk about protective charms Harry had with Bela. It was interesting. The fights were easy to follow and had a nice rhythm. And this new teacher is a lot of fun. I think his ethics clash wonderfully with Harry's. I wonder if it will bring us fireworks.

All in all, thanks a lot for the chapter, it's always a pleasure to read your fics, and the new update made for a wonderful treat to begin my day :)
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