|Reviews for Holiday Vacation|
| The Queen MiMi chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Awesome story, I couldn't help but want to comment when I saw all the favorites but only five reviews! xD
Bye, bye now! ;D
| Hyperkaoru chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This is funny, cute and sex is hot hot hot with so much love between them! But the certain thing I can't take my mind out is Ukraine body pillow (hahahaha! Alfred, that kind of pillow always come with sexy babe usually very naked for fatasize) and certain Brit in punk torn jean! (OMG, droolworthly!)
| DanieSora chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
ahah loved it
| The Time is Now chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
It was very cute. I loved the sun burn, pretty funny. Good work :)
| The Ink Is Blood chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I have a difficult time with this site's layout as is, but just a bit of friendly advice. When you don't space out (or re-space, as this site seems to never save) it makes giant walls of doom that is hard to keep up with.
So, you just might want to re-edit this. Or not.
| DestineyTot chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
You already know how much I love this, but I just wanted to say it again: this is freaking great. I swear, that last little bit at the end with Francis and Arthur always manages to make me lol. And the smut was sweet and hot. Loved it. :)