Reviews for My Story: Naomi Cee Prime
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
you said on your profile your name was Mallory my name is Mallory too
Guest chapter 44 . 8/4/2014
love ur story!
Grace Raichert chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
This needs a lot of work. I notice atone of spelling and punctuation mistakes. You should try and fix those. I am very confused about the whole robot turning into a hologram thing. It would be nice if you were somewhat more specific with that. I personally am not a shipper of Optimus and Arcee. There are many things Optimus says that really in the end he would never say. It needs some work but I think in the end you could make it a really good story. If I sound offensive I am sorry but every writer needs people to give their true honest opinion.
StarLight837 chapter 44 . 6/3/2014
Oh my goodness, you're back! Yay! It's been forever! Glad to have you back in action! And awesome chapter!
Bee4ever chapter 44 . 6/3/2014
Awesome story! More please?
AuthorDude99 chapter 44 . 6/1/2014
You're alive! Good. If you don't know who I am, that's okay, I'm not trying to be the most famous person on the site.
Optimus is Bae 17 chapter 43 . 4/7/2014
When are you going to write another chapter
CT-55555 chapter 43 . 10/19/2013
Hey can u pls update? I have been waiting for months!
Guest chapter 29 . 9/14/2013
Please Update!
StarLight837 chapter 43 . 7/29/2013
Awesome double-update, girl! And thanks for the A/N thing! 8D
Poopface chapter 40 . 7/28/2013
LoveSummerWind chapter 19 . 7/23/2013
I 3 Sleepovers
LoveSummerWind chapter 18 . 7/23/2013
LoveSummerWind chapter 15 . 7/23/2013
LoveSummerWind chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Ugh, ER
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