Reviews for Comatose
demoness of music chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
O.O okay this was slightly choppy but it's still pretty good I would suggest that you type up or write down an outline and save it somewhere that you can find easily and wont forget that it's there to help with the plot forgetfulness
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
hehe ludwig pissed
ash chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
thats really good
Tarajara chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This is my favorite out of your stories so far. I only have two things to criticize so far:
1. Please check the spelling in your blurb. (Is that what it's called? My God, I can't remember.)
2. You've written the entire song, this makes it seem as if your writing abilities are poor, and you're just using that to add more words to your total count.
Please update soon!
DFWMSeme chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Are you planning for there to be an update? It would be totally awesome if there was.:)
Furansu-chan chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Wow. This is really good so far. I like it.
time.girl1342 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
It's as awesome as allways *fanted because of awesomeness*
SkyOrihara chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I haven't really seen this pairing before, it's really sweet.