Reviews for A Thin Line
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11
So awkward, so cute, and so hilarious - all at the same time. Loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
Oh my gosh, that was cute and awkward - all at the same time.
zar33n chapter 1 . 4/10
Dude that was awkwardly amazing. Hahaha lovely story. Thanks for sharing!
bobbie chapter 1 . 1/21
I love these two. Any chance you take requests to write some more. Fun interaction watching that DVD together, using the new vibrator, coming out at school should involve lots of ribbing, car double, and I definitely think katniss would be intrigued to hear peeta s past experiences as she has none of her own, should cause some sweet embarrassment, sure peeta would have reciprocated generously for his blowjobs, ...
anya chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
Hi

really love these two - great characters - she is a bitch but really like here inner thoughts - any chance of Peeta's inner thoughts?

Know this story is old but ... would love to read it.

I know you didn't plan on writing more but think watching that video together would be fun - and maybe more awkward sex in the car and being caught after the party - sure would love to read coming out at school -

if not a long fiction - a short epilogue would be really great.
Louise chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
I love these two characters. They are my favourite characterisations of modern Peeta and Katniss (and I have read a few at fanfiction). I would really love to read some more. Will it be a long term love affair - is Peeta in love - can he convince Katniss she is too?

Always love to read about Peeta and Rye - what would big brother's reaction be? And it is very sweet between Katniss and Gale in this too.

Would love to read Peeta and Katniss actually watching the gonzo porn together - think that would be amusing!

Thanks very much - please write some more.
Ana chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Hi absolutely my favourite modern day katniss and peeta story, and I have read a few! Katniss as spunky as ever and I also really like a bit sassy peeta but I still get the feeling that katniss is the only girl for him. I would love to hear how these two make it through the ups and downs of young life and make it together in the future if you were at all motivated to write it would love it.
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 5/24/2015
Gale! XD

That was an extremely funny and smutty read. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
Sweet read.. Love the smut! xD

We gotta love UST! :D
Koshivuh chapter 2 . 5/8/2015
Another great chapter! I just wish there was a third :) Maybe there will be some day!
Koshivuh chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Haha, some real love for this story. It was awkward, yet cute and sexy at the same time. Loved this and I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.
NotMyBabies chapter 2 . 1/31/2015
Most realistic first sex scenes ever! Good job of not being overly sentimental! Loved it!
Sarah chapter 2 . 1/17/2015
i keep coming back to this fic, such amazing chemistry and while the sex is awkward is still really hot. i know its been a while but maybe youd consider doing another chapter and expanding on them in a relationship together now that it's not a secret or something else? in any case just wanted to say i love this fic and it keeps me coming back
Guest chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
That was strangely adorable.
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
Can you continue this? this is literally the funniest thing I have seen, in a while, and quite frankly, I loved the sassy yet sappy part up there.. about liking him and not correcting him and not hurting her... awww
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