Reviews for A Thin Line
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 5/24
Gale! XD

That was an extremely funny and smutty read. :D
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 5/10
Sweet read.. Love the smut! xD

We gotta love UST! :D
Koshivuh chapter 2 . 5/8
Another great chapter! I just wish there was a third :) Maybe there will be some day!
Koshivuh chapter 1 . 5/8
Haha, some real love for this story. It was awkward, yet cute and sexy at the same time. Loved this and I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store.
NotMyBabies chapter 2 . 1/31
Most realistic first sex scenes ever! Good job of not being overly sentimental! Loved it!
Sarah chapter 2 . 1/17
i keep coming back to this fic, such amazing chemistry and while the sex is awkward is still really hot. i know its been a while but maybe youd consider doing another chapter and expanding on them in a relationship together now that it's not a secret or something else? in any case just wanted to say i love this fic and it keeps me coming back
Guest chapter 2 . 1/14
That was strangely adorable.
SlowlyDivergingAllAtOnce chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
Can you continue this? this is literally the funniest thing I have seen, in a while, and quite frankly, I loved the sassy yet sappy part up there.. about liking him and not correcting him and not hurting her... awww
Chat1 chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
Loves it!
eloquent dreams chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
I really enjoyed this story. It was hilarious and I like that you decided to go with a more realistic approach. Everyone knows the first couple times aren't the ridiculous, perfect, "everything I dreamed of and more" that most stories portray. So I definitely applaud you for that. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more of your work in the future :)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
So good! Please extend this greatness!
Ginahidesbehindtheglasses chapter 2 . 2/10/2014
Oh my god, I wish we got a follow up
Aundielen chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
haahahaha this was great. Oh teenage love. LOL
Aundielen chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
oh awkward teenage sex. tis the best. lol!
TheNewClassicGirl chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
this makes me laugh so much
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