Awwwwwwwww! I was looking forward to a chapter but oh well. Seems like you're in the same boat as me. My laptop crashed 3 times in a row and deleted all my files, while at the same time I am experiencing a major case of writer's block. Seems like none of us can catch a break, huh?

OH MY SWEET DARLING! XD *hugz*

Yay next one's gonna be a long one! But will it be a QUICK one? D:

*grabs chainsaw* Watch as I attempt to slice down all writer's blocks in front of you. *slashes* *chainsaw breaks* *smokes* Sorry dude, can't do anything about that *goes to the emo corner*

Yay Bandit Bob is gone! He's pathetic *cheers* c: And yay Lily's...erm, less spoilt. I think. She knows fear. YAY FEAR! :D Me lurv fear cuz me ish da one who spreads it :3

Lily must have photographic memory or something to memorize all faces of the marines. I wish I have that. *sighs*

Who are the new guys? Pirates? Hmmm...

Anyways looking forward to the next awesome chappie! xP

-Rea

Can't wait for the next chapter, especially if its gonna be longer! Poor, poor Ash as soon as she finally comes back into the story the chapter ends... I also think that the scene between Mik and Lily was cute, but being a loner myself I wouldn't know how moment like would be like... But yea anyway, I seriuosly am excited for the next chapter!

Nice chapter. You're right: that Mik/Lily scene seems out of a soap, but I liked how Mik is starting opening.
I can't wait to see Mister Black:)
See you

Omg that scene between Mik and Lily was so cute! I would love to see more lovey-dovey scenes between them in the future!

I find it amazing how you can depict each character's personality so clearly yet get them to interact so smoothly. *Snicker* I especially loved the character interaction between Kai and Callie. That's about how I imagined it usually plays out between them.

But who is Mr. Black?! What is Mik hiding about his past? I'm really glad you updated, but now I have so many unanswered questions!

Ooh! A long one! Does this mean Capricorns, since the crew is big?

I like your author's notes more then I like most stories...
Anyhoopla, once again a nice little chapter. You make character introductions feel smooth, so keep up the good work.
Mime out.

Something about the description of the town, and Lily's reaction was... so REAL! Just kidding. It was honestly a good, beautiful paragraph, that offset nicely with the quicker pace of the rest of the chapter. And it was a nice bit of development too. Brownie points!
*Note, each time stevethemime (tm) says 'brownie points', it is worth exactly one brownie point. One million, four hundred thousand and eighty-two brownie points are required for a single brownie. No refunds accepted.
Mime out.

Oh cool we got a view of some interesting characters. :) Your writing is looking good, keep up the awesome work! I look forward to your next chapter.

Im so sorry that i havent read this sooner! I have been having MAJOR technology issues latley. I LOVED the bit about Russet! It was so cute! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Shimmmmy shimy yo! Shimmy ya! Shimmy yeah! won't let me sign in today!

So I review on the downlo - away from prying servers and bot control. Through the zigs and zags of ads and firewalls; lurking closer and closer...until! -flying jump tackle- HUZZAH! KIZA! I'VE GOT YOU!

0namakiza0...Kiza? Yes?...No?

-coughs-

Hello once again! I have indeed missed you and the tangled web of fiction you weave! I know I haven't reviewed for some of the other chapters yet, and I will! Probably in reverse order. I just wanted to fly through them all to see what I have missed! My conclusion is that I love you and we should elope.

XD I keed, but seriously I do love your writing style. The scenes always come across so well with the subtle hint of humour. It makes me laugh as I go along and enjoy the tale. Pardon my irraticness, I am sleep deprived and full of coffee...

I intended to write more, but my laptop is dying and apparently will not charge so I part with this! Good luck with school! Never worry to much about it! And above all. You kick ALLLL the ass! 8D Until later my crazeh internet pal!

Roan - Out! -com static-

This is a neat little intro. One of the best I have seen, actually. Well done!
Mime out.

Awesome characters! :O Man, they should just give out nobel prizes for the best imagination to everyone c: Make them feel more than just a wee bit appreciated. LOL.

I'm interested in Shabeth. Why? Because I'm sadistic enough to hope that her flames burns all her hair and eyebrows and they'll never grow back. Keyword : NEVER. Yeah, I'm evil. :) Just kidding lol. I'm more interested in the screw-up Shabeth had caused. Poor Nuna. Or in Korean, poor unnie. XDD

OMAIGAD YOUR LAPTOP GOT TAKEN AWAY? *bursts into tears* My condolences, darling. I'll be praying for its safe return. *prays*

I really can't wait to see these awesome characters being introduced LOL cuz they promise so much mayhem and fun XDD

-Rea

You should do a part 2 for the next chapter. I was dying to see Yuki-Rin and Molly, but, sadly, they're not in this part. XD