Reviews for Darkness and White
juliana alicia miller chapter 109 . 4/25/2015
I used to have this stupid idea in my head that anyone can write... I even thought I can write! ... writing thousands upon thousands of words of landing pages, product descriptions/reviews, technical papers, business plans, other people's homework etc sure can get to one's head... it did to mine... but reading your work is very humbling... i realize i am in no way in the same league as you as a writer... but instead of feeling bad about that realization, it allowed me to simply let go and learn to enjoy your gift of words... your story so far has made me cry, scared, happy, angry, sad, giddy etc... i don't even know enough English words to describe the roller coaster ride of emotions your story has made me feel... thank you
juliana alicia miller chapter 100 . 4/25/2015
omg my heart is pounding!
julietteBauer chapter 115 . 3/16/2015
I'm re reading this!
MadMonster25 chapter 114 . 3/9/2015
Wow!
Just.
Wow!
I have been enjoying your book so much and really feel that you could take it further, I'd say try and send it off to a publishing house because it really is amazing!
Did you ever end up doing book 3? I tried looking for it but could only find FSOG stuff.
And if you didn't, is Will ok? Or did he fall back into old habits for good? And how is Amy's mental stability?
You did so well in this and I have enjoyed it heaps!
Thank you!
again.i.go.unnotic3d chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
Book 3? I need it! Lol
GIA80 chapter 115 . 10/27/2014
ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THE STORY? I LOVE THIS STORY... PLEASE UPDATE SOON...
kelly.w.hathaway chapter 115 . 10/4/2014
Did you end up writing book 3? Is this the end?
Guest chapter 115 . 9/20/2014
No no no need updates asap! Please! Need to know what happens
amysuer chapter 115 . 8/18/2014
OMG! You can't just end it her. What happens next. I read the entire story over the weekend. Does Dino find Amy, What happens to Will? Is Simon really dead. Please continue
lee chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
Are u ever going to update again cause I can't wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 86 . 6/23/2014
I really enjoy your writing style; your characters are very complex and dynamic and I enjoy that. Great job!
Guest chapter 115 . 6/19/2014
You are by far, my favorite author on ff! I have read everything that you have written. I do t know why, but I initially avoided Darkness and White. Maybe because the characters had different names? Regardless of why, I finally read Darkness and White. I figured I would read that while I wait for your updates to your
other amazing stories;) I must say, Darkness and White left me with sadness and delight. I thoroughly enjoyed D&W and did not want to to be over. So many emotions in me while empathizing with the characters. Now, as book 2 concludes, I should be happy Amy is free, but I am left with sadness for different reasons.. Sadness for Will and Amy, sadness for Dino, Tracy, Charlie, Leigh and Billy, Laurel
and Jeff and yes, even Frankie and Simon. Can't wait for book 3 and the updates to all of your other fabulous chapters! Thank you for giving us readers the gift of your writing! xoxo- Anne
Guest chapter 115 . 6/13/2014
YOU HAVE A GIFT FOR WRITING NOW GIVE ME A GIFT. BRING BACK YOUR STORY. THE ONE THAT'S A CHEATING STORY ONLY IT'S ANA DOING THE CHEATING. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. PERHAPS PERHAPS PERHAPS?
Sofi chapter 9 . 5/1/2014
Hey, Erin! Thought I would leave a review here at this checking point. And wow, this is good! I'm not going to get any work done today (even thought I really should :S) but this is a really great story and I keep clicking next.

Everything about this is so spot on. Her trauma, even her weight gain (which I think a lot of writers would be to vain to write about), how she's reacted, all of these are accurate. In 50 shades, Christian would be torturing Anna and all she would care about is his brooding good looks or the way his muscles flexed as he stabbed her with a hot iron poker. And she'd be worried her dying and bleeding all over the place would make him mad lmao. I'm glad to see a story which has more integrity and your message is important too, it's a responsible one. She still loved him but she had to do the right thing, which isn't the easiest thing to do. The selfish thing to do would be to stay with such a person because your immediate gratification matters more than what's good for you long term.

It's always exciting finding new great work to read and I'm glad I found yours. Thank you.
Sofi chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Hi Erin!

Have just started reading this and am blown away at how good it is. It's scary and intense. And far more realistic than the actual 50 shades. Domestic violence is a really tricky topic to write about but you've done it justice and you've accurately portrayed what most people are afraid to write about because it's very politically incorrect. That loving a person doesn't stop just because they hurt you.

I look forward to reading more :)
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