|Reviews for The Road Trip|
| unleashthemockingjay chapter 3 . 2/9
I love this story, please continue and don't worry your writing is great I've seen much worse from native English writers.
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
This is a really great story. Please update
| AnimagiPotter chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2013
I really like this story! When I first read it, I had no idea it was written by someone who had English as their second language. The grammar, punctuation and spelling are all perfect! :) Update soon please!
| nluvwithemmettcullen chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
Awesome story please continue!
| pupeez4eva chapter 3 . 1/26/2013
Oh my god PLEASE update soon! :D I've been waiting for a fic like this for ages!
| TonnaMama81 chapter 3 . 1/25/2013
Will you update soon I really enjoy this story
| applebombz chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
I like this version. Lol it shows that there was another way for Emma to come to Storybrooke if August hadn't told Neal to ditch her! Update soon!
| Russian8once1psych7 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
New favorite story this is so good!:) can't wait for you to update
Don't feel self conscious about your writing your good I've always felt self conscious about my story's and I have taken a slight break due to awful writers block but here's a good story an you are a goo writer!:)
| featherdusterpixie chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
oooooo...whats gonna happen now?
i think your vocab and writing is great!
dont be discouraged!
| featherdusterpixie chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
this is gonna be interesting!
and with regina having no connection to henry, the evil bitch can die with no drama! yay!
| featherdusterpixie chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
i really like the idea of neal staying with emma and then they with henry coming to storybrooke.
cant wait to read more.
| Amyvicky chapter 3 . 1/14/2013
OMG you have to update this! It's so good!
| Dewaysha chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
Well, I definitely know that I want to read more of this story. Please continue as I'd like to know what else you have in store. It was very well written and I hope to see more of it soon. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/7/2013