Reviews for Discovered Talent
Fan-of-Fandom279 chapter 6 . 2/20
Um... before it said that Jonathan went to boring school? Errr, that means he wouldn't be home for breakfast in the morning, or need a lift to school?
Puppy 17 chapter 4 . 10/14/2017
Dam, I've already read this! And here I though I found a great new book...
Book Dragon 2002 chapter 1 . 10/14/2017
a potato chapter 18 . 8/1/2017
"Oh My Bob" lol
Puppy 17 chapter 11 . 6/30/2017
I really, really, really hope that Raphael and Camille work out!
Puppy 17 chapter 8 . 6/29/2017
Poor Morgensterns!
Puppy 17 chapter 7 . 6/29/2017
GREAT CHAPTER! Little things by 1D fit perfectly in that situation. Earlier in the chapter you said that she had a temperture of 124 degrees. A high grade temperature is 104 degrees. If a temperature were that high you would be dead. Her parents would've rushed her to the emergency room. To make it more realistic you may want to lower her temperature to 103 or something
Puppy 17 chapter 5 . 6/29/2017
I really like this so far. I love how Jace had the snob image on the outside but on the inside he is a loving man. I know that Clary will bring out the very best in him! I love this story and just wanted to point something out that might help. You have a lot if grammar mistakes that I'm sure you don't make when actually speaking. It might be beneficial to get a Beta. This is totally, 100% your choice and you can forget this suggestion if you want, I just think it may help a bit. Personally I can never pre-read my own writing. I never catch my own mistakes, it's like I already know what's on there so I just scan it, which isn't the best thing for a pre-reader to do. Pretty please don't get offended, you are a fabulous writer, I just wanted to point this out, having someone pre-read my work helps me.
Puppy 17 chapter 2 . 6/29/2017
Lol Clary hates Jace... But he will not give up
Will H. is my bae chapter 18 . 12/28/2016
That is the sweetest story! The best song was Beautiful! You ended this story beautifully!
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2016
This is really sweet! :)
pizzalover4ever chapter 17 . 4/27/2016
Girl,you should relax and kinda test yourself if u really like him!
Ky-ky chapter 18 . 4/18/2016
Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2016
The paparazzi, disguises, and her wanting his fadora? I get the feeling that you've seen Starstruck. Am I right?
jaceclary101 chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
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