Please update!

FINALLY, AN UPDATE! I was anxiously waiting for one and it was worth it. Merry Christmas to you too as well! :D

I've been reading your story since last year, and it is so beautiful! You write well. I hope it gets more popular.

so what will happen to cheren

Amazing story write more chapters please! Is Makoto going to go on a journey of her own?

All I can say is that was an excellent battle scene. And I'm very impressed at the length of this chapter.

Ohhh! Finally got the time to finish reading chapter 12! You are definitely right about Zekrom (from Ideal Friend) being much different from this Zekrom! But I must say that this story is very well written, especially since English isn't your native language! I am quite impressed.

I hope Cheren wins against Alder! (OvO ) Go, go, go Cheren! You can do it! Woot! *inserts bet* Well, I absolutely can't wait for chapter 13! Amazing job!

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*me facepalming the keyboard from where Link came from XD

LOL I cant believe that

When you write your intro that grab people's attention through the other thousands, it's a good idea to specify what kind of things will happen. Like Pokemon turned human story. I had to wade through 8 chapters of this emotional crap (sorry, bad day) to find out I hate this story (again sorry, good writing and all but it's just the plot that I damn to the seventh layer of hell)

Kyurem...please talk...

Aiyumi! You're Alive! good to see you back!

But poor Kyurem... I can't stand seeing Kyurem destroying everything around him out of hate and anger. I understand how he feels because...I felt the same feelings to the world when I was shunned. i wanted to just wreck everything in my way.

Kyurem is just like me in a way, and it makes me cry seeing him like this.

I hope Touko becomes great friends with Reshiram after of IF she does reveal herself

plz write another chapter!

i luv this story! more! more! :D

Awesome chapter!