|Reviews for Until We Bleed|
| I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 10 . 5/27
Okay... I didn't understand what just happened
| I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 6 . 5/27
No shit. I was seething in anger with that bastard of a 'doctor'. What a prick. I was screaming "Pluck his fucking eyeballs and tongue, Yata-chan!" The moment he opened his mouth, I wanted to holler him.
| I'm a Coffee Bean chapter 5 . 5/27
Damn. That was heavy...
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/5
I really hope you update this soon! It's my favorite fic and I've been waiting so long :(
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/22/2014
Hello! I really hope you update soon, as its been a long time and you've left us at a cliffhanger. I really really love this story, you do such a good job with the characters and the plot is amazing. So thank you!
| Deidara4ever chapter 10 . 10/12/2014
You know, after Reading all he other chapters I was happy, then this bomb came and I found myselg sitting on my bed, Crying. I'm so sad(confused, yes)and Everything feels so painful. Poor guys! TT_TT
| lori chapter 10 . 9/28/2014
I love this fic to itty bitty pieces. It's been months since you last updated. Please be well and update soon! I must know what happens next.
| Anotheranonymous001 chapter 10 . 6/27/2014
I started reading this yesterday and just finished now. Yeah, you have managed to confuse at least one person from the audience, let me tell you. ;) I’m so sad they lost one of their children and hope the monster who did this to Yata will be found soon. …But I guess that’s something you’ll reveal a loot later. :) Also, Saru must believe him when he spills out the truth and beat up the /thing/ that did this! TvT Sooner or later he will end up remembering, no?
The way you wrote this is pretty much realistic, it’s one of the charms of this story, I believe. The drugs, the prostitutes, their overall reactions… I enjoyed the fact that their lives are not rose-toned.
On the second/third chapter, when you said that Yata might be ooc, I think he was in character. :) After all, we all break down sometimes and he does too, he has every right of feeling tired and insecure. I write a couple of of AU’s and I can say that it’s hard trying to guess how the character will act when we never saw him on situation ‘x’. Stuffing the fic with the usual character might, rather will turn the whole situation ‘fake’ and unrealistic. The key is thinking –basing yourself on the overall character and incorporating it in you - shape and write down the outcome. When the situations is completely new, you have to adapt the character to it – always carefully and thinking on what he/she’d do. You have done that and it shows. I have a tendency to cringe when I read something ooc and I never did it once when I read your precious work so congrats! :D
I love the way you’ve written this fic so far, beautifully done. However, when you told us that the plot will ‘start’ now, I was confused. I don’t know what you have in mind but then shouldn’t you have paced up the fic? I don’t mean to offend you, ever, yet we’re in the tenth chapter. Nevertheless if such a long beginning was needed then thumbs up.
You’ve got me utterly curious to know what will happen next, I’m crossing my fingers and wishing you’ll update fast.
| jasdevi's secret sissy chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
...i'm a twin...so this made me cry alittle
| PT-chan ssu chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
MISAKI! ;A; oh the poor child! (Saru too
Was he Hallucinating? Or is it the Strain's powers? Dammit wanna know!
XDD Eagerly awaiting an update ssu!
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
My mind is blown. This chapter was jesus christ, it was confusing. jdfhdgfk SO GOOD
| Satan-chan chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
Aww :( Poor Misaki... I wonder what's going to happen when he explained what he saw?
| Blackhatred chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
I'm confused, what the fucking hell just happened...it was great though?I hope you update soon!
| Pls go thru chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
Please let this whole chapter have just been some kind of horrific nightmare... everything was going so well! Too well, I guess... ah... poor Misaki. Was the 'attacker' possibly from the Green clan, or was it some kind of rogue strain?
| DarkAngelz99 chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
I was so happy to see this update and I love how the story took a plot twist and how Saru is angry. Can't wait to read more!