Reviews for Living Spirit
sheshy chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
'It's nicely raped state' lol okay
Caelum1427 chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
Ember's singing the Welcome to the show
AstroGravity Phan chapter 20 . 5/5/2017
Tsukiko K chapter 2 . 9/22/2016
Grammar and sentence construction is terrible but the story concept is good.
Specter14 chapter 20 . 9/8/2016
Welp that was awesome xDDDDD I totally teared up toward the end! Nice job, thanks for writing! If there's a sequel I'm so there :D
BBCDP2 chapter 20 . 7/14/2016
Hey yo, i spent like 1 and a half days reading this story and i found it to really good despite some grammar errors. I also want to let you know that i love the cover art for the story- IT'S AMAZING! :D :D :D :D :D :D
Golden feathers Edward chapter 20 . 4/27/2016
This is a cute story! I love it! Hope to see more stories like these in the future. X3
EcoReibun chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
congrats for 69k ;D
SpiritTrainer chapter 20 . 12/13/2015
that was amazing i loved this story right off the bat though i had to think about what a word was due to spelling but i figured it out no problem. gonna go read your sequel now.
Arandomperson chapter 19 . 10/25/2015
What?! That went seriously well, she only fainted. She didn't tackle him and try to re-kill him.
Random person chapter 13 . 10/24/2015
Poor Danny. He can't remember ANYTHING. I feel depressed now. Still ️ it.
skiller339 chapter 20 . 6/17/2015
I Love this story it has a great plot and everything there are cheesy part but who cares. Danny is a living spirit.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 6/7/2015
DAWWWWWWWWW! Oh, the IDEA of Shadow hiding from playful little Danny is AMAZING!
Anonymous chapter 2 . 6/7/2015
Yes, the Observants are annoying one-eyed creeps! Oh, and I love that you gave Clockwork a sense of humor rather than making him stony. He seems a bit OOC at times, but that can be excused as he is dealing with a five-year-old kid and therefore has to adjust his approach a little.
Random Person chapter 12 . 3/7/2015
No offense it might just be typos but raping and wrapping r 2 VERY different things
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