|Reviews for A Crime Fitting the Punishment or Dumbledore's Monster|
| sparky40sw chapter 1 . 3/6
Astoundingly harsh, and a completely logical extension of the crapilogue
you have amazing writing skills and a real way of painting word pictures that are horrific - thanks for leaving some hope at the end for the upcoming generation.
| Kage640 chapter 1 . 3/5
that was awesome great story loved it
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 1 . 2/28
ASDFDGHLK I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT GODDAMNIT!
| natasha.jones.1654 chapter 1 . 2/25
Fan-Funking-Tastic loved it.
| Haruchan-chan chapter 1 . 2/6
| Veggielover1 chapter 1 . 2/4
Incredible story here. it was really enjoyable! The refrences to Frankenstein are fascinating. great job.
| acrimony1029341 chapter 1 . 2/2
A brilliantly written story. This will likely be a favourite for many years.
| old-crow chapter 1 . 2/2
Thanks for sharing your story. It was a most insightful tale.
| This guy doesnt have a clue chapter 1 . 1/28
| EmptySurface chapter 1 . 1/19
I'm really intrigued by that last comment... What did he mean by that? And did he really kill all those people he claimed? Hm... It would be interesting to see the aftermath if that really was the case, to see what the world would turn into.
It would be chaos, but would it get better? Or worse? Hm...
This was expertly written and you built it all up very nicely, pulling the reader along and keeping my interest high. I found the fact that Harry was comparing himself to Frankenstein's monster very interesting and I loved the way you made him clearly insane, while still having the real Harry deep inside, even though he was broken and defeated... I don't know if that makes me a horrible person, but I don't like it when people just change everything about who he is.
| DestroyerDRT chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
Would love to see a follow up to this and what happens to change the way thing where.
| norgeshma chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
This is an awe inspiring story. Done in a way that most show the back story with out stating exactly what happened. Loved it.
| Starfox5 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
I reread the story again, for the 4th time. It's one of the best explanations of Dumbledore's folly and faults, and utterly defeats Dumbledore's (and Rowling's) ideology.
| LuxEterna1 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
even if it is 'heavier' than my usual fare
| Andrius chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
That was very well written. I could almost see the dark future Harry ended up in. I hope what he did made present Harry's life better.
You seem to have misspelled a few names and terms. It's no big deal, but... yeah.
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