|Reviews for Pillow Talk|
| BendAndCurl chapter 1 . 2/27
The part about his Grandmother made me want to cry, too. Also I love the idea of them saying things in the dark, that's a headcanon now. PS Way to go Maka's mom. Not even showing up for her graduation, figures. Anyway, I loved this. I discovered "Red eyes bleed green" last night and needless to say I was THRILLED that you have written more! So yeah I've been waiting to get off work so I can read more of your stuff and I am not disappointed :)
| TheSoulReader chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Oh god, my HEART! The description of how he reacted to the death of his grandmother.
| Kawaiibentou chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Great Soul and Maka story. This version of Maka is great.
| hilarryousmefics chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Your writing has me feeling some type of way I swear.
And the sex metaphors, GOOD LAWD.
THIS IS PERFECT.
YOU ARE PERFECT.
| scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
this was really sweet especialy for shameless smut
i almost don't feel bad about reading this it is so sweet
"Either you have a fever, or I broke you last night, because you just turned down sex in favor of paperwork." Maka answered dryly.
um what the world just ended a guy did what now? a teen one at that? and from a girl he actualy likes as more than just a fuck?
yep broken indeed
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Loved it! :) Super sweet and funny- just amazing overall.
| Thunderbreeze chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
That was AWESOME! Maka and Soul meeting at night in the dark to talk about things they felt they couldn't in daylight was an interesting idea. Leave it to them to be able to fix things for one another, no matter the obstacles. Good job!
Black*Star and Tsuabaki...I...I can't even describe how funny that was. Treats, dog ears, a leash...kudos to you. This is definitely going in my favorites xD
| Shadow Cat From Hell chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
To the treatment room!
Hahahahaha, omg so much yes
There are epic trilogies shorter than this.
Hahaha, I love your snarkySoul!
| Unknown chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
LOL! LOVE IT! BOTH HOT AND FUNNY!
| OtakuCertified chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I can't believe I managed to read the whole thing at 3 am...YOU ARE WORTH IT
| Hackingofthedead chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Again, I loved this and enjoyed it greatly. I love your work, always makes me excited when I see another one of Bitter Novembers stories. you are turely one of my most favorite authors, one that I follow and wait for on a daily bases. I may like a lot, but you are truely up there in the top five.
Thank you for always working hard for your fans! :)
| rainsrabble chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This was very xute. I really like how you lightened things up n the end with a lighthearted scene. great job. I feel like the tony the tiger guy, but seriously, mad props I like
| wildchild911 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
the ending was icing on the cake, excellent work, more plz
| silvergryphon06 chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Sweet and erotic at the same time! I bow to your superb writing abilities, excellent job! :)