|Reviews for Raised Turian|
| WarFlower chapter 17 . 5/22
I don't like their relationship... I'm such a heavy shakarian... lol
| dnguyen686 chapter 23 . 11/21/2016
This last chapter made me think of star wars being song thing lol
| Kotali chapter 11 . 9/21/2016
I love everything.
I love your Jane; Your Garrus; your everyone. They're all so wonderfully written. I even kind of like your thirst Kaiden. Lol.
| Kotali chapter 2 . 9/21/2016
Okay, I love it...
| Kotali chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
I like it, I think.
I will keep reading.
| Kyo12591 chapter 13 . 8/1/2016
Well at least Garrus wasn't shot, it broke my heart when Nihlus died. Great work thus far, I didn't know if id like it, glad I took a chance an started reading. :)
| DONOVAN94 chapter 23 . 5/30/2016
I love this!
I wasn't entirely convinced at first with the characters we know and love turning out to be bad guys. But your writing, story and mastery of atmosphere and emotion completely sold me.
| TheRangerBoy chapter 15 . 12/3/2015
Damm... you actually made me hate Hackett. That is a feat to be proud of...
| Taeniaea chapter 23 . 11/2/2015
| LadyLament chapter 23 . 8/8/2015
Wow...This was the biggest soap opera-y mass effect story I ever read. And damn was it good.
| Elemental Queen chapter 23 . 7/9/2015
Thanks for writing such a great story! I enjoyed all of it, and it really read as well as any published novel. :)
I cried a bit some parts and you had me hating humans lol so I really wanted to choke several characters during this story :3
Keep writing, you're good at telling a nice story.
| Kakaski chapter 23 . 4/15/2015
Oh man this has had me in tears for a long while, every character has been done greatly, even though I wouldn't have minded seeing more of Jane's mom and sister before you killed them off, I don't care what other people think of how you treated Kaiden, it was a great story for him and the way he died was decent: doing what was right after coming t realization.
I can't wait to read more stories of yours, and if they are this good I'm gonna have to buy more tissues, I am interested on how close the Alliance and the Hierarchy will grow, given who is in charge.
As for the Council part and the ending paragraphs, perfected like a real author, truly this is one of the few stories I love and would read again.
| Kakaski chapter 18 . 4/15/2015
This story has me in tears, not soft, little crying, full on weeping. This is great writing.
Even though I am now emotionally destroyed.
| amber8807 chapter 21 . 12/3/2014
laughs, now when i replay Masseffect and i see Hackett i dont like or trust him lol
| amber8807 chapter 23 . 12/3/2014
omg this was an amazing read! thank you for posting it!