Reviews for The Night I First Loved You
cyberimp6 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Your writing style is very good, and you show a nice consideration of the details of the world of Tenchi. (Though it's peculiar that a cup of Blue Azusa tea somehow turns into Green Jurai tea.) But the story is missing in the key element of conflict and resolution. Like Ayeka, the story eventually returns to the starting point with nothing decided.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Maybe wonderful