Reviews for Overwhelming Darkness
Guest chapter 30 . 4/28
Post hidden in the shadows. I'd like to read that one.
kellyainsley chapter 15 . 4/26
I'm sorry, I was enjoying this story even seeing the plot hole with Angela but after the claiming scene I can no longer read this. How can you drop the ball so badly on this. From the beginning it's always been about how she's so protective of her family because of how she lost her baby and jake. Therefore not a virgin. Then you say that she is a virgin as Jaspers taking her. Pity you made such a simple mistake. You even stated in earlier chapters that he wasn't happy thinking of her being with another man.
huiqi.chua.5 chapter 32 . 2/21
Please update
Kera Atchley chapter 13 . 11/15/2015
Poor Bella!
Kera Atchley chapter 12 . 11/15/2015
Uh-oh!
Kera Atchley chapter 11 . 11/15/2015
Go Bella!
Kera Atchley chapter 10 . 11/15/2015
Excellent chapter!
Kera Atchley chapter 9 . 11/15/2015
Amazing chapter!
Kera Atchley chapter 8 . 11/15/2015
Bella is amazingly strong and kind! What are Edward and Alice planning?
Kera Atchley chapter 7 . 11/15/2015
Fantastic chapter! Poor Angela!
Kera Atchley chapter 6 . 11/15/2015
Great chapter! Poor Marcus!
Kera Atchley chapter 5 . 11/14/2015
Bella is so kind!
Kera Atchley chapter 4 . 11/14/2015
Awesome! Poor Bella!
Kera Atchley chapter 3 . 11/14/2015
I love Seth! He is so kind!
Kera Atchley chapter 2 . 11/14/2015
Bella is amazing!
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