Reviews for Rin's Fanfiction
Lamia chapter 12 . 7/20/2013
Yayy! I just finished the entire 12 chapters! I absolutely love the story (although there were too many swear words). I expected the story to have more twinecest (of Rin and Len) but it's all good! Good job with the story! :D
DarkestThingInTheLight chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
OH MY GOD GIRL. THAT WAS SO FUNNY LIKE OML IM STILL LAUGHING, LOVE YAAA
a nalu fangirl chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
OH MAH MUTHAFUKKIN GAWD B*TCHES YOU JUST F*CKING SAID JACK F*CKING FROST ORH MAH GARD I LURVE HIM! Like seriously, I bought the DVD today and watched it like an hour ago. XD JACK IS SO MUTHERFUKKING HOTT! Jussayin', b*tches. You should poat (jacksh*t, i said post) the sequel soon-hopefully I will have an account by then...so...see ya on the flipside and I love you! :)
liz chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
omg this was awesoooomee cant wait for the sequel! AND BTW RIN I LOVE JACK FROST TOO OMG
Yukkimurii chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
I'd enjoyed this story very much. It was funny, tear-influencing at times, and had its share of"holy-shit-my-face-is-red" moments. Although that was in the Rinto and Lenka fiction part. Both of the endings were really great, the Lenka and Rinto one, the ending to the actual story, and even Mikuo's true ending. Was that confusing to say? Oh well.

Hope to see more stories from you soon! c:
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 3/27/2013
Dude you sure you're not a masochist? No sane person would miss the fact that his/ her sibling physical abuses him/ her. I only stick with scaring the crap out of her when I have the chance. Well in my mothers country it applies the scarier the person get's the funnier it is. Maybe one of you should try it :D. Hide behind the closet, under the bed or anywhere else. Wait till your sibling comes in and grab her ankle or lick it, make it wet or do something else unexpected. I can guarantee you the reaction is priceless,

U sure you were okay when you... harassed your sis? No drugs, high, hypnotized or has your brain been switched with someone else? Anyway you can sue the nurse for pedophilia, since your sis is a freaking minor, also a nurse flirting with his patients is shameless. And a tip for Ren if you want to use an RPG game as excuse for beign behind the laptop, choose one that goes online, like Crystal saga or Eden Eternal, at least it'll be normal to type, since there are other players from all around the world. I only heard the name of Jesse Mcartny, but that's all. I mostly listen to Japanese and Spanish songs and some English, but J-pop is still my fav genre. Damn I feel like falling asleep while reviewing, I guess I'm to blame, since I was up till... 6 reading a manwha... addiction can have it's flaws. .
Honeycloud of RiverClan chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
Spelling errors everywhere, Rin. xP

IS LEN THE ONLY ONE THAT CAN TYPE CORRECTLY?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
I noticed you updated, so you must have a reply to my reviews, but if I were to read that chapter, I'd be like FTW is happening? So should I just read the message and respond in this chapter or should I wait till I am at the last chapter... second one sounds a bit stupid so nr. 1 it is!

*Read's response to review* Okay well then you're welcome. I love reviewing, even though I can be sometimes lazy when it comes to reading, but if I really love the story and like the author I'll review for sure :D.
Didn't I mentioned that I had a twin? Did I? or did I now? I can do it just in case :D Hi Meri, did you know that I had a twin? She's one minute younger and of course smaller than me, so I will never knowledge her as the oldest of us.
People don't have to make sense to write good stories or answer reviews, it's the insane one's that have the good stories.

If you can't laugh for a joke about yourself, then you can you make jokes at all? care about your pride doesn't make you awesome, being able to laugh at jokes that are about you, or your own ridiculousness makes you awesome!

I am glad you liked the song. I am a super big fan of Nana Mizuki. She sings such awesome songs, like Dancing in the Velvet moon, Trinity Cross, Black Diamond or Gimick game. She together with Kawada Mami are my nr 1 singers. oww and try to listen to asgard fortissimo/ akkord: Bsussvier or Angel/ residence of the nightmare from Kawada Mami. They are all awesome songs. I also like group hugs :D
You never heard my mom speaking English is so funny. she can't pronounce an r, e or a right or a v or z.

back to review maybe the reason we comment more to your comments than your story is because the comments are more than 50% of the chapter. XD So the change is bigger that we respond there also MIKUUU I WANT YOUR FB!

On to the next chapter.
Nmaeless chapter 12 . 3/27/2013
Ef you Len. I don't care whether I misspelled the same word asdfghjkl Just... F. U. Len.
Still, I appreciated teh lemon! It was hawt :3
But then... Are Rin and Len, like, gonna write another fanfic of Rinto/Lenka? Or maybe they'll start messing with other people and started a story based of their genderbents?
Jack Frost has made me quite 'frosty' :3
SEQUEL YAYAYYAYAYAY /shot
Yeah. Bai.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
Maybe it's time for Len to visit a shrink. Being addicted to sex and all those things is unhealthy. I've seen it a lot of television and it's seriously bad.

I guess Miku is very close to Rin because she's a girl. Of course she learns more from her. To who else does she have to come for advice when she got her period for the first time or any other girl problems, like going shopping ask which dress looks better, what should she wear today. A boy isn't much help with that. My sis would be kinda helpless without me or our mom telling her what fits and what looks terrible.

So now something I always wanted to do, hug the Kagamine twins. Yup you two are super cute and I'd feel refreshed to see two of the same kind as long as I don't seem y own face everyday... which is a lot. I am used to it, but still 24 hours a day is a lot.

I also think it's alright even if you and Rin still have trouble with pronouncing English flawlessly, my mom still can't and she never will. She'll always have an heavy spanish accent. Maybe if she practiced English since childhood it would be different, anyway. I'll read the other chapter another time, I feel like I've been going on steam. *waves* oww and I can recommend you a super funny movie to watch Meri and that's Rat race. It's super funny and you won't regret watching it.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 3/26/2013
They're finally going to make up yaaay. I do agree that you need to cool down a bit with the cursing.

I do wonder why Rin made it as if Rinko was some kid of perverted playboy. That's not such a good thing, thought it is funny, because it almost looks as if Rin was drunk when she wrote this, but that's impossible because she's a minor.

Well my view on twincest is clear. It's like doing it with yourself or being in love with yourself... you're blood related... same DNA same bloodtype. Surprisingly you like the same thing, or almost the same things and you know each other inside out. Of course there are some differences. Anyway I'll keep reading, I wonder how Rin will fix the story and make her character less... pimp-like,
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Aww that's sweet of you and don't worry Len, she'll forgive sooner or later. You're twins and twins have the closest relationship you can have with siblings. Even thought there are times I don't want to admit it, but it's true. I can't stay mad at my sis forever either, good thing I am the more mature of the two so I forgive her faster than she does with me, Also it's very kind of you that you fixed the story and when she get's back, she should change her password. Hmmm what else is there to say? Oh yeah, Hi Meridan :D *waves* I know an awesome song you should listen to. It's from Nana Mizuki; called heaven in the Hell and I am seriously in love with it. Dreamland and Sing for the moment from Luka are also worth to listen too and Light song from Miku. There are too many songs that get me addicted so I stop before I don't have any space to write anything else.

BTW love this fic!
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
And I was about to slap Len again for making her sis sound stupid and because I thought he took over Rin's fanfic. But why does he teach himself those words. You shouldn't brag just because you found out what masturbate mean! Should I slap him now or not? Anyway it's pretty funny how Rin fooled me into thinking that Len was the one writing it and bragging about himself.
The lonely excuse is pretty obvious, my sis does the same when I am in my room doing... the usual, but I always send her away telling her to leave me alone or go back to her own room, where she has her laptop,.

And that Ren's messing with the fanfic is also not unexpected. If my sis were to do that I'd kick her or punch her. So Ren does deserve a bitch slap. Why are boys always the pervs? Thought here's an idea to satisfy Len's dirty thoughts, he can use the word he learnt today and get into action, he should be happy that he kinda looks like his sis, maybe it's good material for Rin's fanfic. Humor is always welcomed :D

Yes Len you should apologies as for Rin, don't act like nothing's wrong, it won't help you. As make up write a story where you ridicule yourself to make her laugh. I'd love that :D
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Lolz I like stories like these, when the main characters try to write a fanfiction. I am not such a fan of twincest myself, due to the fact that I am a twin and trying to see the closest person to me in that light is kinda... odd and yuck, but I am a VOCALOID fan so yup i'll read this and a slap for Ren because he insulted Miku!

Popipo!
a nalu fangirl chapter 11 . 3/18/2013
I've never heard of calling someone a condom as an insult. :/ oh well *mentally adds to list of valid insults* i should really get an account so i can FAVE O RITEEEE THIS SHIIIIIIITT. DAYUMDICK! Please update so i may be edjumfuckingated on new dickass words. Mofos. BECAUSE I CAN. That is all.
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