Reviews for Deconstructing Bella
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 28 . 5/21/2013
Animals are great at that unconditional love thing!
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 27 . 5/21/2013
Good girl, Bella. Writing is good.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 25 . 5/21/2013
No kidding, she sounded like a robot but more human. If that makes sense.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 24 . 5/21/2013
Finally a smile! But how long will it last.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 23 . 5/21/2013
Bella needs to let that trailer girl out! That's who she is including the girl she is today. She needs to balance them both.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 22 . 5/21/2013
Rut Roh!
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 21 . 5/21/2013
Wait a minute... Alice is the cat? hhhmmm
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 20 . 5/21/2013
Jasper left? *raises eyebrow*
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 16 . 5/21/2013
I need to be invited to the blog... ; I'm very curious about your characters.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 12 . 5/21/2013
UM WHAT! :) Charlie, her husband, that's a nice change.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 11 . 5/21/2013
WOW that makes sense now.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 9 . 5/21/2013
Strictly Ballroom...is that a real movie? Continues reading...Intrigued.
Shades Of Purple84 chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
Interesting. Bella on a high pedestal that no one likes.
Daphodill chapter 32 . 5/9/2013
I've been reading this series this evening, I'm not sure what led me here, but I'm glad for the rec. This has been a really interesting journey. There were a few moments that gave me a WTF pause. Um...Bella and Charlie...total shock and awe right there.

I have truly enjoyed the varying characterisations of everyone. They are unlike anything I've read. Jasper being an old homeless man, Alice being a cat. Emmett. Everyone was very rich in this carefully rationed wording.

Wonderful job, I appreciate the effort that you've taken to use more dynamic wording. I most assuredly appreciate the risk that you've taken with the subject matter. Really nicely done!
the newest daughter chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
She sounds so boxed off and so life warn. I love it so far the short chapters are easy to read
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