|Reviews for happily ever after?|
| alexma chapter 3 . 2/26
Cute fanfic please update soon thanks
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/2
| Liih chan chapter 3 . 1/22
Where's continuation? owwwwwn Tomoe with Nanami is soooooooo cuteee :3
| lilkathra chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
love to know what happens next
| TerryMcair chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
Awww I really like this story, its really cute :)
Ummm... one thing though, I don't mean to say anything bad, because I love, love, LOVE this story... but could you maybe work on your grammar and spelling? It was kind of hard to read the last chapter... but other than that, your story is great. I love how Tomoe is caring for Nanami and is accepting of the new baby :) it was also funny when Tomoe got jealous of Mizuki touching Nanami's stomach XD keep up the good work. :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Omg! Sooo cute! Lol, what's the baby gonna be? A boy or a girl? Either 1 would b adorable I think anyway haha... but I think it should b a girl with nanami's family only being able to have a girl and whatnot... anyways when are u gonna update? Plzzz quickly lol i luv this story :D I'm lyk a HUGE kamisama hajimemashita fan... lol btw I really lyk how tomoe is SUPER sweet and caring and understanding in this story lol. Anyways, just wanted to tell u that u r doing an incredible job! I luv it :) keep up the good work XD byeee!
| Chi chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
I really like this. Suzuki te kudasai, please continue.
| Amayada chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Interesting! Keep up the good work!
| Yuuzu Kitaharu chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
aaargh, I love this pair! I hope you keep update this story until the baby come out XD
| Amanda Zvaigzne chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
This story is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
So please, continue writing this. Althought, this is a new anime, it's allready pretty popular!
Can't wait for next chapters!
Keep on the good work,
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Oh yes! I'm also a female. You shouldn't be so quick to judge someone as a certain gender because they are correcting you.
And you cannot prevent me from making these comments. So you don't need to waste your time making "rules".
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
I have lots of stories, as well as many readers. I'm not using my account because I knew you would "attack" me like this.
Your writing is bad, but you should strive to fix it, not swear at and prey on people who point out mistakes.
As for the second languages, im pretty sure romanized Japanese is still considered Japanese and a different language than English. (e.g. "arigato"). Also, dont try to edit them out and pretend you never did that - because I do have screen caps.
As a writer, although I doubt you could be considered one, you need to understand that not everyone is going to like your stories, and that cussing people out and deleting their comments makes you look immature and childish - a weeboo twelve year old in a sea of mature and sensible young adults.
| Blue Rogue Linds chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
The premise of this story is cute and all, but your lack of proofreading makes this painful to read. There are many things you could do to remedy this: Get a beta reader, use the proofreading tool in the Documents Manager of this site, and learn to take constructive criticism more gracefully. Not everyone is going to praise your writing because if they did, you would never grow as an author.
I'm not condoning your Anonymous flamer, but they have made some valid points. Ignore the insults and focus on what they said you should fix. Dropping the F-bomb in a reply to someone's review is considered abuse, and it could be reported to the admins. So watch your language and ignore the peanut gallery when they attack you personally. You need to take this story down, edit it and re-write it. :/
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/21/2013
This is terrible. Try using proper spelling, grammar an puncuation for once - as it's like you are just slamming your face across the keyboard and pressing post. Your plot is lacking and your characters are all out of their real/written personalities - not only that but you've added random Japanese words in too - what, are you a weeaboo? How would you feel if Russian was my first language and I randomly added French to my speech and writing? It's confusing, isn't it!? God, you have a long way to go before your writing is even half decent. Try revising it, using spell cheek - writing it in a word document for all I care! Your story is shitty, and you should try and fix it. Because I'm sure I'm not the only one hos laughing at it right now.
| luchia911 chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Ok fine ur right about the whole rule and i put u at the end arigoto because ive seen it spelt like that. Im pretty sure im not the worstworst writer im pretty sure there's Wooster. I didnt knowknow if were male or female neither did i care. Im not trying to be childish. Im 12 im 14. And im not a freaking weeaboo. That word just sounds stupid. Ik im not the best writer ik im. Not but i dont write new chapters for u . Write them for ppl who like my story. And im work on improving my writing always.