Reviews for Mai's Teacher
Thedudeist chapter 10 . 12/1
crossover characters always die. :( At least in the serious ones.
Bearmauls chapter 14 . 11/29
Not sure why Naruto didn't just sharingan Long Feng right there and bypass all future Ba Sing Sei problems...
Thedudeist chapter 7 . 11/29
i hate his orange jumpsuit, couldn't he stick to something that didn't look like a giant onepiece?
Guest chapter 20 . 9/20
Great story, glad I decided to read it again!
it's just another primate chapter 2 . 9/15
Im thinkin its the sharingan and he got it from kakashi, obito, or madara.
noxenrom chapter 3 . 9/6
Boring noncanon stuff
zubhanwc3 chapter 1 . 9/2
the only thing I'm confused about so far is why you placed so much emphasis on anko. I hope there was a reason, and it wasn't just haphazardly done. other than that I like this first chapter
Ilireanwri chapter 1 . 7/8
Whom Mai descended from... is too troublesome to think about ;)
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 1 . 6/27
this story was amazing. thank you for writing it! also that sequel teaser is agonising. also having naruto taking Hagromoro's place as the guiding spirit of the world or whatever was brilliant just everything about this story i loved it and how you linked the decendants honesty the northern water tribe would have to be hyuuga decendants! and the southern inuzuka in my opinion based off of their personalities. i love how you did danzo's decendant after unveiling who it was it was like a 'duh!' moment lol thanks again love your work!
armegedonknight chapter 10 . 6/24
It makes me shake with unbridled rage when you refer to Aang's group as the Gaang.
Shu Ouma GC chapter 1 . 6/10
Damn
salasdaniel74 chapter 1 . 3/18
I will think of an answer over cloud watching, ~troublesome.
The Perfect Re TPR chapter 2 . 3/12
gonna take a guess, and guess its sasukes sharingan since he seems to love making physical notes on his body to remind him of the worst of people (which is why he had the bells and straw hat like akatsuki and the long hair of madara...)
The Perfect Re TPR chapter 3 . 3/12
whelp guessed wrong. i wonder where ull go with this story honestly, and jf ull continue it to legend of korra... anyways, nice chapter even tho im getting a lil impatient due to how i wanna see how aang reacts to naruto and likewise.. i can honestly guess how naruto would react to aang, but aang being the child he is while seeing the fire nation as genocidal assholes, and seeing naruto on their side would probably make him immediately hostile and antagonize naruto... god how i would love to see Aang antagonize naruto, making naruto the misunderstood antagonist xD
The Perfect Re TPR chapter 1 . 3/12
amazing first chaoter. i do have a few complaints if ciurse, but none that are too major... except that it was kinda oc how he would be so suddenly focused on building up uzu out of nowhere, and that he didnt think of konoha as his home... which i call bullshit. He fucking killed so many people and such in the name of konoha and peace and his precious people... and most of his friends are in konoha. so yeah, i dont believe him when he says he doesnt feel like konoha was ever his home... but meh. its ur story. just curious... why Mai of all people? and why choose THAT family as her ancestors... tho it is very funny how its those ones xD
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