Reviews for Mai's Teacher
lookalike96 chapter 20 . 2/5
This is beautiful
Flamarow chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Wow, that is one doozy of an introduction. The way you introduced the White Lotus into the story certainly amuses me. I'm extremely curious about Naruto's reaction to their existence. :D
Thedudeist chapter 10 . 12/1/2017
crossover characters always die. :( At least in the serious ones.
Bearmauls chapter 14 . 11/29/2017
Not sure why Naruto didn't just sharingan Long Feng right there and bypass all future Ba Sing Sei problems...
Thedudeist chapter 7 . 11/29/2017
i hate his orange jumpsuit, couldn't he stick to something that didn't look like a giant onepiece?
Guest chapter 20 . 9/20/2017
Great story, glad I decided to read it again!
it's just another primate chapter 2 . 9/15/2017
Im thinkin its the sharingan and he got it from kakashi, obito, or madara.
noxenrom chapter 3 . 9/6/2017
Boring noncanon stuff
zubhanwc3 chapter 1 . 9/2/2017
the only thing I'm confused about so far is why you placed so much emphasis on anko. I hope there was a reason, and it wasn't just haphazardly done. other than that I like this first chapter
Ilireanwri chapter 1 . 7/8/2017
Whom Mai descended from... is too troublesome to think about ;)
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
this story was amazing. thank you for writing it! also that sequel teaser is agonising. also having naruto taking Hagromoro's place as the guiding spirit of the world or whatever was brilliant just everything about this story i loved it and how you linked the decendants honesty the northern water tribe would have to be hyuuga decendants! and the southern inuzuka in my opinion based off of their personalities. i love how you did danzo's decendant after unveiling who it was it was like a 'duh!' moment lol thanks again love your work!
armegedonknight chapter 10 . 6/24/2017
It makes me shake with unbridled rage when you refer to Aang's group as the Gaang.
Shu Ouma GC chapter 1 . 6/10/2017
Damn
salasdaniel74 chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
I will think of an answer over cloud watching, ~troublesome.
The Perfect Re TPR chapter 2 . 3/12/2017
gonna take a guess, and guess its sasukes sharingan since he seems to love making physical notes on his body to remind him of the worst of people (which is why he had the bells and straw hat like akatsuki and the long hair of madara...)
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