Reviews for Mai's Teacher
Sarah132cs chapter 5 . 18h
Is Ozai an idiot? he just pissed off Naruto! an Now Naruto considers him a full out foe .. and will probable kill him on sight.
Narutofan8762 chapter 21 . 19h
I would love to read a NarutoxTy Lee fanfiction, I don't want to read a different version of this story. I feel that the two stories would be basically the same, just with a different girl. I would rather read a story where they are peers, and maybe Naruto can teach Ty Lee how to be a ninja. How about having a younger Naruto transported to the Avatar world (either different time or different dimension). It could start right after the Forth Shinobi War or during the Naruto series. That way Naruto doesn't have to be over 100 years old. Can you try something like that?

P.S. Please don't give Naruto the Sharingan or the Rinnegan. He doesn't need them.
Phoenix Paladin chapter 21 . 2/9
Would Ty Lee be more attuned to learning the various Tai- and Kenjutsu that Naruto would have learned? I can only imagine she'd be a dead ringer for Juken, along with Killer B's Kenjutsu. Maybe even learning to use Tsunade's Super Strength technique for those special moments?

... Now I have this really, REALLY awesome image of Ty Lee going up against Fire Nation soldiers with anywhere between five to eight swords and pretty much breakdancing around them while they're too busy just trying to keep track of her.

Honestly, I can't see Ty as much of a Nin- or Genjutsu user given what I know of her. Mai, yes. Azula, terrifyingly so. Ty, not really.

In regards to elemental affinity, I'd say that Ty would be a primary water with a secondary wind, given that her canon movements are extremely fluid while being quick and more geared to wearing down than cutting away.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25
I thought for certain Mai would be the legacy of a more or tenten
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 1/10
well, in all honesty he just made sure he will remain sealed forever with the requirement of a pure soul.
Wise.Nothingness chapter 6 . 1/5
Well... good chapter :)
Wise.Nothingness chapter 5 . 1/4
Awesome fifth chapter you have here...
I like the development between Naruto and Mai.
Mai was growing well too... now, she can keep growing until becoming force to be reckoned with.
And what is it? A Jūbi comes back to world? Wow, very wonderful twist...
Love the chapter :)
Wise.Nothingness chapter 4 . 1/4
Awesome battle man... a tactic worth of Nara... I love this chapter :D
Wise.Nothingness chapter 3 . 1/4
Aww... I like Mai's new appearance... she's very Kunoichi-ish...
Well, I wonder what her element/s is/are?
Good job!
Wise.Nothingness chapter 2 . 1/4
I think it was awesome when you took Ozai down few pegs...
However, I little sad you choose only Mai, not Ty Lee too.. she's lovable girl :(
Wise.Nothingness chapter 1 . 1/4
It was good twist for Naruto back story...
Love the prologue :)
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
Interesting idea, but you ruined it with waaayy too much drama. Seriously, move on and focus on the present already.
blukmage19r2 chapter 8 . 12/27/2015
Pretty good story.

If only Shikamaru and his clan, of the past and present, can only see it from here.
rinnegan holder 45344 chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
Mai came from the nara right? she is lazy: check, she is smart: check
need i say more?
Jiggly Joe chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
Going to reread this story. I stopped before I finished last time, not sure why. Also, I looked through the stories you've written. A lot of them are incomplete, with only a couple of chapters, and haven't been updated in a while. This is... disappointing, because every one of them (judging by the summaries) has a very interesting plot behind it.
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