|Reviews for A Chance Encounter|
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 34 . 12/17/2013
Ohka, I can't believe I said that but that ending with Alexis and Alucard was so cute! Such romance, loyalty and passion! I stand in awe at this fic!
You have earned my respect.
| Moontan chapter 34 . 11/19/2013
At last! A story I enjoyed that is actually finished. I think you did a good job, even if the final revelations about Seras were a bit short. Still, it was interesting to see her on the 'bad' side, even if it was through her own mistake, Alucard's sharp response, and the manipulation of the other vampiress. I also like how you delved a little into what happened to Alucard between the events of his 'beheading' and the ones described in Dracula. After all, there was a great deal of time in between that is pretty much ignored by most people.
| Moontan chapter 13 . 11/19/2013
I just have to say, I loved the line where the whore is described as being moved forward by her breasts instead of her feet. Made for a rather amusing mental image.
| Moontan chapter 12 . 11/19/2013
Heh. I'm wondering if this is a bit of the writer's opinion bleeding through on the matter of the novel Dracula. I guess it could be seen as pretty dry. I'll admit that a lot of the new articles and such were boring the first few times I read it. But any of the diary entries by 'important' characters were rather fascinating for me.
Still, I love listening to Alexis' opinion on the book. Very entertaining.
| Moontan chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
Alright. I've read three chapters in now, so I figured I'd put down some of my thoughts.
You have several good lines that have kept me reading. Also, I do like the fact you're writing from a consistent third person point of view.
What made the deciding factor for me to continue reading was the whole Integra blunder on the part of Seras. Beautifully cruel. I look forward to reading more.
| DraXXter chapter 34 . 8/27/2013
I was blown away by this story. I don't have enough words in my English vocabulary to truly express my feelings to this fantastic piece of writing. I found myself captivated and saddened and excited and probably a hundred things more as I continued to read this. I read through the whole 34 chapters in one go, well I did eat and things like that but you get the point.
This was just WOW, Fan-effin-tastic!
| SkynardTLB chapter 14 . 8/24/2013
Except for the dang cliffhanger you truly don't disappoint If the rest of the chapters are anywhere near this excelant then I would suggest you try to get published!
| SkynardTLB chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Yeah he's enjoying himself though how wouldn't .
Yeah there might be a relationship brewing between them.
| SkynardTLB chapter 8 . 8/24/2013
Dam bra you share got the creative juices flowing on this one.
| SkynardTLB chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
Yo right on you kinda lay it on thick but you do good work!
| YunYuuzhan chapter 34 . 7/28/2013
This was... a very good fic, as well as just good fiction in its own right.
The pacing was the best part of this work, in my opinion. It struck more or less the perfect balance between nice, fluffy moments, action, plot and character development.
As far as characterization goes, it was pretty much on point the whole way through, and the OCs were enjoyable. Some of the brief side characters, such as the estate manager, also gave the story a depth of flavor most lack. The characterization of Seras hurt my soul, but worked within the premise of the story, and didn't feel OOC, just a sad but plausible direction for her to go. My only regret is that Liam didn't get fleshed out more, I wish he'd showed up a few chapters earlier, and hade more time to develop as a character, but if you do a sequel that will be one the things I read it for.
Plot wise, the story worked as a vessel for the characters, which I think was the point. The plot itself was strait forward but enjoyable, and did a fairly good job of balancing the more mundane plots with Hellsing's supernatural aspects, with both being quite strong.
The prose was top notch, with a few but limited typos and generally good flow. Dialog felt believable while remaining true to the sometimes (enjoyably) melodramatic stile of the OVA/Manga itself. The only real weak point, as is so often the case for written works, were action sequences, which tended to be direct and without much complexity or detail, but did a perfectly fine job of furthering the story. Alucard's fight with Liam was the highpoint of action sequences in this story, as well as Alucard's brief fight with Seras. This is reflective of the fact that the writing got steadily better in all respects as the story went on.
TL;DR/For anyone skimming the reviews before reading, Give it a shot, it's definitely one of the best Hellsing fics on the site.
| Kabub chapter 34 . 7/22/2013
Oh, it has been done! I feel like it's a miracle! :P
I didn't really have much thought about Stratonice before, but making her the evil master mind of everything was AWESOME! I didn't see it coming, then it was there, and then she was gone. Just like that. Unleashing Alucard down to level zero seemed like super overkill, but I don't mind :) Some more Vladcard would have been nice, but you made him have just as little appearance as in the manga... on purpose? o.O
And we get a super cuddly, fluff ending. Wasn't that nice?
Well it wasn't super fluff, but just fluffy enough.
I am so glad you didn't pull that traitor card on Liam! I couldn't bare Walter's either! But it seemed like Liam kind of just whimped out at the ending there. Not like he could have done much at that point anyway. Must have been hell for him seeing all those ghouls.
I would love a sequel to this! I will wait, just surprise us all :) Btw, I liked your Facebook page, so let's see what come out of your original piece! I'm excited!
| Alessandra chapter 34 . 7/20/2013
A very good ending ) It's a pity it's over but the story it's awesome and I really enjoyed. I'll misa it thouth...
Good luck with tour original work!
| Valerie Michaelis chapter 34 . 7/20/2013
I DEMAND A SEQUAL.!
| Valerie Michaelis chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
god i love this. you write alucard so well. you havnt written a thing i dont think he wouldnt do.