Sure, it's not like Torres have any military secret in her mind, right? Like location of earth, human techs, or anything important.

Why bother going into the beacon when you can teleport in the planet with a aircraft, get the beacon teleport out and get out of the system.
It isn't as if you know where it is deposited after all.

Oh what an amazing story! A shame it's been dropped, I would have loved to see this story finished

Ehh this chapter made me lose interest. Shepherd is clearly way too unhinged for command. The outburst with Williams was at least understandable while still being completely unacceptable but this outburst was over fuck all. Was already starting to feel a bit too much like a rehash so having Shepard also be an unlikable unhinged asshole is just a bit much for me. Guy killed thousands of innocents because of an outburst and has already had two incidents in so many months, it's insane they don't have him on forced leave seeing their best psychs. Nah let's promote him instead. Clown Xcom.

Great story, but did you seriously have to abandon it here. There’s like 1 chapter remaining

So why aren't womholes used to cut ships in half?

I like that they do not praise the strength of the turians and that although the Xcom forces took the ships it was not an easy victory and that is what interests me in a story that although the humans are strong they do not consider the military capacity of the citadel in a story that even though humans are strong, they do not consider the military capacity of the citadel

Just retreat back and leave the council no need to play along with them. Humanity survived just fine without them no need to stick around and play stupid games with the council races

Why does every mass effect story start off with the asari melding and people are ok with it, kill the asari for fucking around cause they are basically stealing military secrets along with the language. They are basically mind raping

good story

Damn, it ends here of all places? That's an evil cliffhanger, to stop the story right at the climax of ME1...

Quite surprised a Human in this verse (especially a version of Udina of all humans) would be willing to take the threat from the effective head of the Asari race to put his "entire race to the torch" lying down without even taking offense. Wars have started for lesser words than that from heads of states, and this is a humanity with exceptionally volatile history with xeno races.

Oh my god, please don't tell me they gonna go "WaoW we go FuCCkkk dis BluE AliEn ChicKKSS hurrr" no way in hell I'd let Asari go and fucking subsume my species.

yes why would aliens possibly react negatively to you invading their minds.

the constant spanish thrown in is really unprofessional for soldiers and tbh annoying to read

Is it bad that Jack Harper convinced me lol. Good job man!