Reviews for Sarah |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Update please it be over a year |
![]() ![]() I'm so excited that you decided to continue! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() Omg...u changed the ending...which I great by the way...but are you continuing with the story...(please say you are :]) |
![]() ![]() Much better. More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you redid the ending, I like it. Will you continue the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't appreciate that ending. Far too abrupt, no closure. Not that I don't understand. Sarah made the dumbest choice possible, and this is the only reasonable outcome. Just... Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! It can't end here! Surely there's a way to work things out, and even if there's not, I have to know what happens next! What does he do when they come for her? Does he use Awake on her and try to get her to run? Does he try to make an escape with her? Come on, just one last chapter for the conclusion! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmmm...cuddling, clearing the air, chocolate chip pancakes...sounds like a recipe for a budding romance to me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! A little H/C never hurt anyone, but that is so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the wonders of the friends with benefits! Yeah, that would definitely make things awkward for that to come out, lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Now we're starting to get somewhere...gotta break through the barriers somehow, and the whole misunderstanding between both of them needed to be cleared up before they could move any further. Awesome job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like a certain Soul is falling for a certain human...heehee! Of course he couldn't tell everything, but he did tell the truth when he was talking to Sunny about the situation. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew she wouldn't go too far! He must not be home, or he has company...must be why the Cheetos bag is missing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww...how sweet! Naturally, his compassion and help would get through to her; she'd have to have a heart of stone for it not to. I have a feeling she's not gonna wander too far away. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() HA! I love his confusion at her behavior and some of the phrases she uses, it made it funny to me. I can totally see this happening, too. Of course she would assume the worst, but that's because she's still got the mindset of what a human male might do and doesn't know anything about how the Souls really are. Wonder how he's gonna answer her question? |