| Reviews for Sarah |
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   schizo-nephilim chapter 2 . 5/20/2013 Lol, of course Sarah panicked! Any wild human would've in her situation. After all, the typical Soul's first instinct in that situation would be to call the Seekers, but I'm really anxious to find out how this conversation goes! |
| schizo-nephilim chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Awesome first chapter! I love the description, and it's nice to see totally original characters in this world for a change. I especially liked Sings Above the Mountains' reactions to her...first fear, then concern, then deciding not to call the Seekers yet because he knew she would just be discarded. Can't wait to hit the next button! |
| Ichigo chapter 15 . 4/17/2013 You should continue with them on the run and they need to meet up with other humans. |
| ellie.koleva12 chapter 15 . 4/14/2013 No no no! You can't finish the story like that! It's really good and you get caught up in it so easily. Please continue it?! :) |
| AreYouFrickingSerious chapter 6 . 4/8/2013 I've noticed that you over used the words 'Um' and 'Ah' a lot. Make sure to watch out for repetitive words in dialogue because then it ruins the story otherwise. I'm trying to ignore it for now since I do enjoy this story but could you please take note and try to use these words a bit less? Apart from that I think you have represented the Souls pretty well :) |
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/7/2013 I loved your characters and was waiting for SAM and Sarah to go on the run. I thought they could eventually end up at the caves and meet the gang or at least one of the other resistance groups. |
| Stygian Willow chapter 15 . 4/7/2013 ...Im not sure if you are kidding or not...I mean the story doesnt appear as complete and...and...IT CANT END HERE! NO! What kind of ending is this! You cxant leave me like this! |
| patsy chapter 15 . 4/6/2013 It simply can't be over! |
| KenaBeliever chapter 14 . 4/2/2013 Heart-thumpingly intimate! I think you might've one-upped SM with the last line. Perfection. But clouds loom on the horizon with a surprise visit on the way. |
| Stygian Willow chapter 14 . 3/30/2013 Great chapter as always! So far they are good, considering the situation they are in...and I have a feeling that Pet and Sunny will take part in those complications...especially because of the first scene... update soon! |
| maddie chapter 13 . 3/23/2013 Holy fucking shit. I loved it. i read it all In twenty minutes. PLEASE FINISH. I usually hate fanfictions, but this was beautiful work. Amazing. truly amazing |
| Stygian Willow chapter 13 . 3/23/2013 great chapter! Yeah I noticed now how their different species is becoming an obstacle in their relationship...I wonder what things will happen between thembecause of it...jajaja, Im very curious to see how will Sam answer that question xDDD update soon please! |
| Stygian Willow chapter 12 . 3/15/2013 Sara got jealous for the first time xD I wonder what will happen between those two now n,n great chapter! update soon! |
| Stygian Willow chapter 11 . 3/8/2013 great chapter! they make such a good couple! i wonder what will happen! please update soon! |
| wickedwitchofthewest33 chapter 10 . 3/5/2013 AHH! I love it! |