great chapter!

Im wondering if your story is only based on Host, or the events of Host actually happened or are happening? I mean will our characters met them at some point?

please update soon!

Hey John,

That's more like it! :) Again, very good. Maybe she can just sleep in his bed from now on?

Jess

Love love love. Keep going!

Have I missed something or is this not a Sarah chapter?

Oooh! Their emotions and tendancy to overthink everything is really intense!
That moment of the hug where the pov changes to being both of them and yet neither of them was really affectionate and sweet.

Hehe. Ive never really thought of pie as "cooked fruit," but that definitely fits. Sounds weird, too.
I like how complex the relationships are, even if they're background... Unless we'll see more of those relationships later... Hmm.

Oooh, so we finally learn that Sam DOES have a "girlfriend" of sorts. Yeah, I know it's FWB, but still, I hope it ends quickly. I wonder if Sarah is truly aware for her feelings about Sam, and vice versa. I wonder if those feelings are deep enough to remain strong when Seekers get involved? Update soon!

I still really like this story. It's interesting that his host's memories are becoming more prominent. Probably from the human emotions. Are they just memories though or is the host coming back?!

Looking forward to next Friday when I get my next dose. My only request would be that chapters were longer but that's just me being greedy.

Many thanks

J

Yes! Now Sarah is back where she belongs! I cannot wait to see what happens after this. Is Sam's friend going to see her? Will Seekers get tipped off of Sarah's presence? God, the suspense is killing me!

please update soon! I love the relationship between Sarah and sam!

Very nice! I've known for some time that Sam has had feelings for Sarah, but it's nice to have it confirmed. :) Keep up the excellent work!

I really like this and look forward to seeing their relationship develop. Please update soon!

Yaay! :D I didn't have to wait long to see more of this story! I like how Sam reminds her of her previous love - it shows that she already has feelings for him and just doesn't know it. I can't wait to see Sam's point of view.

Me gusta! More please!

Excellent. Though I must say that the trust and near-friendship was developed more quickly than I'm used to, you wrote it in such a way that it still made sense. I love the way that Sings is different from other souls and how Sarah is seeing a different side of the souls than she's used to. I look forward to seeing more of Sings and Sarah! :D