| Reviews for Sarah |
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   Anon7583 chapter 4 . 1/11/2013 You're a really great writer! I will be dragging my computer EVERYWHERE till you update!:) So please update SOON! |
| SBPride chapter 4 . 1/11/2013 I like the story so far...keep it up! |
| The Queen Of Souls chapter 3 . 1/11/2013 Excellent. The tension between the two is tangible and you artfully crafted the rationale of a 'wild' human. On to Chapter 4! |
| Anon7583 chapter 3 . 1/10/2013 ERMIGERD I LOVE this! |
| TheWolf32 chapter 3 . 1/8/2013 Great story lots of swearing but I liked it. Update plzz! |
| AhumbleHalofan chapter 3 . 1/8/2013 Not bad at all. There's some development between the two. My only real suggestion is to keep everything slightly slow. Let any real relationship either friend or well... Develop in a reasonable time period. Also I would suggest a central conflict be created that drives the story. Is he going to keep helping her or report her to the seekers. Something like that would be good. Otherwise good story so far keep up the good work. |
| SBPride chapter 2 . 1/7/2013 Wow very detailed with your writing! Cannot wait for more! |
| The Queen Of Souls chapter 2 . 1/5/2013 This chapter was very realistic - as realistic as fAnfiction goes anyway XD Sarah reacted just as I would - you portrayed the disoriented, confused, scared, angry, desperate and just a little bit curious wild human artfully Sings was great, too. You captured the fear warring with the curiosity and compassion that all souls have almost perfectly. Very nice, very very nice. I'm eagerly waiting for Chapter 3 :D |
| AhumbleHalofan chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 This is still a very interesting little story. I hope to see it continued very soon. There's not much more to say than what I said before when we discussed it. Everything is solid and I can't really see any problem in any of this so far. It's good to see a little originality on here. |
| The Queen Of Souls chapter 1 . 1/2/2013 Not a bad start, John ;) I look forward to reading more |