|Reviews for Monsters In Paradise|
| k8said chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
I must say, this is a very well written story. the Pokemon and their interactions with the residents of Gensokyo are pretty comical, as well as interesting. However! Back during chapter 3, Skarmory and Mismagius both mentioned being thrown through a bright and colorful portal. It seems to me that only one thing could have possibly caused those portals, and said "thing" is the Pokemon Palkia... Just my idea on what's causing the mess... Well... That's all that I wanted to say on the matter... So CYA!
| rabu chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
Wait... Is this Croagunk... Brock's...?
That matter aside, good job in doing such an interresting fic. I really like it. Especialy Yukari's part.
Anyway, please continue the good work.
| 741AuthorNCS-NicolaStarlaLili chapter 7 . 7/26/2013
Hooray! Sanae got her wish to meet something fictional!
You know, I never liked the Anime's "Lugia family". It just made the Legendary Pokemon a lot less special now that there are many more under the sea.
| Firexia chapter 7 . 7/26/2013
This was great. You wrote Cirno perfectly, and I enjoyed Yukari's antics with the bike. And, also... could you use a character from Subterranean Animism? It's my favorite Touhou game, and I'd enjoy reading about one of them with a Pokemon.
| I Before A Except After K chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
TV Tropes will ruin your vocabulary.
| Matt chapter 3 . 5/13/2013
Is Creampuff the Delcatty May's?
| chaosrin chapter 6 . 5/11/2013
Well at least its back to normal
Feel a bit surreal the last two chapters.
A human at the last point? Well that's interesting
Nice to see you updated
| 741AuthorNCS-NicolaStarlaLili chapter 4 . 5/1/2013
Oh dear... Somebody need to get Cresselia into Gensokyo ASAP.
| Gray Shadow chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
So was this chapter serious, or were you just writing nonsense because you were bored/tired/hyper?
| Firexia chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
Umm... this was an interesting chapter.
| Sakuya Lv9 - Former TobyTse99 chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
I am really interested about what Yukari's back-story is. I can see that you start with a very uniform format. After a few chapters, I think I will start to expect some of the lines to developed, (like the Sunkern one) and the "trainers" would start to meet each other before Yukari was done with... whatever she was doing.
Again, I like the Reisen's ear is not for decoration theory, and also Eevee's mental world. It's surprising when it evolved, although predictable when it bites on Reisen's hand.
However, I don't really understand what's up with Marisa, except for she took the Pokémon as hat.
| Sakuya Lv9 - Former TobyTse99 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
The combination of vanilla Touhou and vanilla Pokémon is really interesting to me. I like how you interpret both worlds, the Pokémon mechanism, the danmaku system and so on. I really like your attention to small things like how Yuuka would not know the name "Sunkern". The idea of letting "like terms" (flower youkai and flower Pokémon etc.) group together is quite thought-provoking. However, in my opinion, when Sakuya carries berries back to SDM, the X-colored hair references is too little information for anyone to be able to guess the context.
| 741AuthorNCS-NicolaStarlaLili chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
This is so good I am almost giggling as I read this.
You know you want to give Youmu a Gallade, just admit it.
| PaRuSee chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
I was wondering why Flan's ability wasn't working. Then I realised that Skarmory has Sturdy. Keep up the good work!
| Firexia chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
This was great. You portrayed Flandre very well - not many people do that.