|Reviews for A (Not So) Chance Encounter|
| astrakelly chapter 1 . 2/8
very sweet, well sone
| betawho chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
LOL! That’s perfect! I would never have associated River with Jelly Babies, now that is completely stuck in my head.
“He took a candy, thoughtfully nibbling off its feet.”
Hah! Yeah, Rory wouldn’t bite the head off first. Nice little bit of characterization there.
“bopping them together before they solemnly bit off the heads.”
Hah! How formal, and slightly creepy said that way. ROFL!
I loved this whole thing. You had me crying through most of it. Sweet tears, but still, crumpled handkerchiefs were involved.
I love everything, from the nervousness of River waiting, running her fingers over the chain links and board swing seat. To the descriptions of Mels and Amy, always uncomfortable to overhear gossip about yourself. And the mentions of “being older than they look.” and “waiting a thousand years.”
| slightly so chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Cheers! Best new years sweetness!
| cmartlover chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Very well-written! I loved the premise of this story and how you captured River and Rory's feelings so nicely.
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
This was really fantastic. It really warmed my heart to see this part of River and Rory's relationship. Especially to have Rory describe what Mels means to him. I'm sorry that I haven't really been keeping up with The Lost Days of Melody Pond, but school's been killing me. Hopefully I'll get back to it soon because I certainly haven't forgotten about it. Happy New Year!