Reviews for Waking Up With You
St3rfire chapter 3 . 6/26
Good job on the lemon part. Please continue adding more.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20
what a badly written story you really are worthless
narusaku143 chapter 3 . 12/20/2014
Gah. So hot!
Demonic girl111 chapter 3 . 10/13/2014
(Screams a loud fangirl-pervert scream, blood running from my nose) awesome lemon!
RosesAndRavens chapter 3 . 4/12/2014
Things I concluded during this story:
Little kids balls will drop if they read this.
Everyone has a crazy voice inside there head.
Naruto really needs Sakura.
Sakura will probably be Naruto crazy soon.
Condoms...Naruto can't put one on for shit.
The end.
November Ember chapter 3 . 2/16/2014
This was ...different. nice job.
Trunksmybaby chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
omg.. that was awesome!
scarlet letters in the snow chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
I loved this ahhhh!xD
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
Good three shot.

You did a good job of keeping Naruto and Sakura in character. I can see where you can say a character is OOC but when it comes to different situations and scenarios, people can behave differently from the norm.

The lemon was actually well-written. Description of Naruto and Sakura's feelings and emotions through the sex and love session was more fluid than a majority of other lemons i've read.

Kurama and Sakura's Inner parts were a funny to read.

A sequel seems to be in order, this seems like it could be turned into a series.
Exxcaliburr chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
that was amazing! ahahha NaruSaku all the way
kidloco chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
amazing and you stole my ideas about sakura ass part XD im in that part... XD

the rest is amazing

i know her, i know hwe
guest chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
NaruSaku is totally the best couple. :)
silveroaks chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
hehe... this was nice. i enjoyed it! :D
xxRomanceGirlxx chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
... And that is why Naruto Uzumaki would be the best sex Sakura would ever have. XD All that stamina, please she has no idea. XD

Great first lemon! I really enjoyed it, I can't believe it was your first. And I laughed so hard when they struggled with condom LOL. Whether he's good at it or not, he will ALWAYS have no idea what the hell he's doing in the first time. Clumsy, unsure ... then getting better and more confident. xD Just Naruto's character, I love him so much! c:

I have only a minor complaint and that was that Naruto was slightly OOC. I don't think he'd be THAT sexually aggressive with Sakura, no matter the situation. He's a pervert yes, but not to that extent. I also would like to say Naruto wouldn't accept without hesitation because he's insecure. He would never agree to sleeping with Sakura and having them be each other's firsts unless getting confirmation that she really loves him and returns his feelings. He's insecure like that and takes his feelings more seriously then his pervertedness. :P

You did that exchange about this, but I honestly feel you got the characters backwards. XD NARUTO would be the one saying he doesn't want this to be just sex, while Sakura already knows it's not because she knows he loves her; and that she loved him.

But it's not a big deal at all, I really love this mini-story! :D It's very cute, sweet, and sexy, just like NS. I wouldn't mind reading more of your works in the future. .
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