|Reviews for A cracked thermos and lit cigarettes|
| natsuki23 chapter 6 . 2/12
Surprisingly, I thought Tweek would be more embarrassed. Looking forward to the next update!
| Darkgreendegu chapter 5 . 5/22/2014
Can you write more please? I really like it! (I would consider it a birthday present, 'cuz my birthday's iin three days.)
| bookgirlove chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
I really like your writing style. There is tension but not intense tension. You may want to build up some of the plot in the future and include some more character description depending on how long the story is and where you want to take it, but the story so far is very good. I look forward to reading the next installment.
| Kizi1999 chapter 5 . 3/21/2014
Noo...Clyde and Token ruin the moment...
| natsuki23 chapter 5 . 3/21/2014
| CreekOTP chapter 5 . 3/18/2014
Oh geeze. Just yes.
| natsuki23 chapter 4 . 3/7/2014
I wonder when they will finally stop dancing around each other. I look forward to the next update!
| kyleisdabest chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
please carry this on, it's getting to the good part!
| AmbiguousBastard94 chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
Haha, I liked the last sentence of this chapter. This story has a raw feeling to it; I think it suits the South Park universe. I hope you will update this more frequently.
| yaoifangirl9264 chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
OMG, a new revalation. I can't wait for another chapter, I really love this story. I look forward for new chapters.
| h0ed chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
I really like this. It has a melancholy to it that really makes you feel the characters moods.
I like how you mix thoughts and describing sentences. All of this is complex, with its many layers and details, yet you manage to make it appear simple by coating the story in slang and teenage vocabulary concerning conversations, otherwise your words are refined. All of this is very delicate, I would love for it to continue. Please make more and dignify yout skills by using them... if you won't that will be shame.
Your writing style is unique, it's very personal, be proud of what you can do.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/8/2013
You are a wonderful person. This story is amazing. I need more! 3
| Stuckinapornstar69 chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
I loved this chapter 3 Update soon please!
| Imahumannotasandwich chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
AWWWW! This had creek. It was cute! Hehe. Craig got his ass beat XDDD
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
more now or I DIE