|Reviews for Eternity to Eternity|
| honeybadger42 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
| The Girl Who Wanders chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This was just... jhhdilud. (Krista talk for- OH MY HOLY [or unholy, it depends what day it is] GOD! AMAZING! FANTABULOUS! GREAT! BIEN! GUT! *instert anything else here, by all means* :) )
When this magically appeared in my inbox, I was delighted- I've got a huge thing for your Supernatural Destiel fics, jus' sayin'.
One thing I think you do well with is the sheer DETAIL- you cover enough to make the reader have quite an in depth idea of what someplace, like the house, looks like- but not so much so they're 'drowning' in detail and therefore cannot concentrate on the actual plot.
The grammar and spelling is impeccable- this is something I really struggle with, as you might've noticed- and it really helps the story flow. It's annoying when your eyes keep focusing on the errors.
Gah! The fluff killed me, it was so cute! I like the way Cas is so in character- 'marital bond' as opposed to 'marriage'.
And the kiss…. *stares at screen* was beautiful. I’m still trying to get over how happy they are! In my opinion, think you should’ve made it a /teensy/ bit more detailed though. But apart from that (if you can even call that a fault!) this was flawless!
I'm an odd English girl, lying on my living room floor crying with how happy this all turned out. Don't mind me, I think I'm going to have a major brain-shutdown in a moment.
Until next time! *faves*
-Lock :) xxxxx
| TruffleHeadnolongeractive chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Hehe. I find it funny that today is 1- 1- 13 and there are exactly 1,113 words in this. *giggles hysterically* Okay. Shut up. Everything is funny at this time at night.
But- whoa! This has really grown since I've last read it! What really strikes me the most about your writing is your ability to explain and describe things so well- your fantastic attention to detail. As a fellow writer, that's what I struggle with, so I really appreciate when it's awesome. ;)
I really, really loved that whole first bit. I seriously tear up every time. frankly it's embarrassing.
XD Love this to death. Good luck on your other writing bits!
*hands virtual cookie*