this was such a complex merger of naruto and percy jackson. It was just perfect. I just saw your name on my feed for another work of yours so I thought I would check back for book two. Bymut its still not up. I am guessing you abandoned the idea of a book two but i think you should write one it would totally be worth the read if you wrote it.

Harry Potter: oye eso es mio

book two of the hero of heaven, please.

what Mr. D doesn't count the seconds as well?

next book please

I get the impression that the only reason Cordelia isn't given a last name in this chapter is because Chase was already taken.

I love it! After being told how Artemis uses her quests to accomplish something productive, an already resentful Luke is given an ultimately meaningless goal. It’s like a giant slap in the face, and I love it.

I really liked this story I can't wait till you make book 2 to this story. Since you left it off with the sounding of a second book by the way I just came up with the idea what if you made a reading of hero of heaven being read by cannon percy jackson and his friends and the Olympians reading this story and reacting It would be funny. How Artemis would react to the story along with everyone else seeing how different their dimension is to the story's alternate dimension.

Sucks

The dialogue is pretty bad, the phrasing and grammar is nothing like what a normal person would speak like. Also, all of the sports scenes are pretty painful to read, and seem like they are written by someone who has never played them. Especially since the basic descriptions of mechanics and all of that is horrible. The plot overall had a decent chance at being good but is especially hindered by subpar dialogue.

Your constant talk about the decline of moral values in the West and the comment on climate change make your right-leaning views very obvious, even if you dont specify exactly what you mean by "values."
Regardless of your views though, it's normally not considered good writing for said views to be so obviously shoved in the reader's face. Unless you're doing something ridiculous like making a book of nonsense just to brow beat your views over the reader's head like Atlas Shrugged.

This is a good story but when are you going continue the story

Please make the sequel for this story

Yelp! They are all dommed Naruto is becoming like good old Voldy, let's give them some minutes of silence ... Oh well they are fucked any way

I don't even care that there isn't a sequel; this story ended at a virtually perfect spot. Thank you for giving us such a wonderfully charming, immersive storytelling experience.