|Reviews for An Argument|
| Hammsters chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
That. That my friend, is pure perfection. You had the characters down perfectly, the dialogue was chilling, the actions were realistic, this was just entirely fantastic. I loved every second of it. One question though. I have an idea of what it means, but I'm American, I've never met anyone British or heard this phrase in a Harry Potter book or movie, what the hell does "I had you fagging for me back at school" mean? Other than that, this flowed really well and I loved everything about it. Great job!
| LustForTheLetters chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Well, I can see how this got perfect. The characterization...dang, I am telling you right now, the language is probably the best used in a lot of LoTF fanfictions I have read in awhile. You got the personalities down perfectly, and the way the piece flowed together was really good. Very good job, I hope you write more LoTF-related stuff :-D
| Cocolada chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I like this, but the formatting is hard to follow, like one big paragraph. Might want to fix that and it'll be a lot easier to follow.
...Loved Roger and Jack's first lines there, something about it, I don't know.
'Don't be hitting any o' them littluns.' Jack said quickly, 'If they go a-tattlin' to Ralph-'
'Sucks to all 'em wimps.' Roger said under his breath.' -So much love for both these lines. XD