Hi, just got to the last chapter posted... Is this a work in progress or has it been abandoned?

Why on Earth are all these people so stupid? Why did they let him get his hands on that without expecting the obvious result?

The way you contrive everyone just coincidentally meeting each other at the worst possible moment over and over and over and OVER is getting really tiresome. It's predictable as clockwork at this point.

I wish you didn't spend so much time on those diary chapters, I just don't find them interesting and I don't really care about the characters, knowing that they're both already dead and that nothing they did really came to anything. It also frankly doesn't read anything like a diary anymore.

Honestly, I don't understand why she can't just tell the two that they don't get to make her life decisions for her like that. It's incredibly overbearing and if my children did something like this, I'd tear them a new asshole for it.

Can Petunia now speak dragon without a translator or are you just not mentioning it anymore?

"Angrahad"

It's a bit strange that you managed to spell the name correctly the first time you used it and have been consistently spelling it wrong in every chapter since.

"Right after my birth," Aberforth said. "It was something of a shock to both of us."

If someone ever asks me that question about my own brother, I am stealing that line. That's the most British joke I've read in years.

So I guess Petunia's Home For Lost Dragons is go now.

Now *this* is the kind of thing I was hoping to see. Off the rails the plot train goes!

Honestly, for all that this story is really interesting in theory, the fact that you refuse to deviate from the stations of canon kind of kills any appeal it might have.

"We could get married," Sirius said, with an ingenious smile.

omg what

sirius

no

"Snape said, in his oleaginous voice."

Ooh, really pulling out the fancy words here.

Your pee in a bottle was joke was very amusing and I am enjoying Petunia’s ability to stick it to Dumbledore and Snape as she gains her confidence and magical skill. Kali

This is wicked funny. I’m very much enjoying this story. Dudders the prince of Wales is humorous in 2 ways even if he no longer has the fat and spoiled rancor from his portly pop. Petunia has developed into a believable character with foibles and fate and is not a toon. Kali