|Reviews for The Mystic Sect|
| DarkRavie chapter 3 . 3/7
Interesting storyline. I look forward to reading more of this story.. Soon hopefully.
| MeraHunt chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
I really like this and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.
| Zaxxon chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
Haven't played Assassin's Creed, but saw a very crossovers with Naruto and others... seems interesting background. And this as I said, is very interesting. Also interesting to see how the other characters interact and where they fall on the moral spectrum as well.
| devin.conway.16 chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
Hope to read more soon!
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Short, but definitely a fun chapter after so long a delay! Great work and I'm eager to see what Harry's going to learn and endure under Ollivander.
Please try to update sooner next time, okay?
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
I like it! **
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Not too bad, if a little on the short side. And brilliant idea for using the Marauder's Map as the Codex. I didn't see that one coming. And while 'initial contact' with Harry and his father's assassin persona went about as expected, I don't think it was a good idea to essentially turn the Map into a character, like Riddle's Diary. Just having the Map be conscience enough to know it was Harry and whether or not he was ready/willing to take up his heritage, and to change itself between the Map and Codex would've been enough.
Also, remember that with the human body, change is gradual. You don't lift 50lbs weights for three days and are suddenly He-Man. It takes months, if YEARS, of constant training and practice to build any worthwhile body strength or skill of any sort. Please don't forget that.
Great chapter and I hope you don't make us wait another SEVEN MONTHS to get another!
| Ebru Gunduz Lestrange chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Oh my god oh my god oh my god! Awesome! Update!
| Mega Kilo 69 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I really like this start but could be longer. Can't wait for the second chapter
| kirallie chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
So Jmes knew Peter was the traitor? Why not just move houses and cast a new Fidelious? Or let someone know? Interesting start
| Yuna's Reincarnation-1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
can't wait for the next chapter
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Okay, I'll admit it.
This story has got quite a bit of potential, doubly so because apparently it's going to be down to Harry to train himself into a respectable Assassin, all by himself. Self-improvement stories like that are among my most favorite and I eagerly await to see what comes next. Even more so since you're apparently not going to be using the Animus, which I wholeheartedly agree with, especially considering if you're using the AC-timeline and thus it hasn't yet been properly developed and tested since it's still close to 30 years prior. I just hope that you'll put in a bit more effort for the coming chapters and make them quite a bit longer in comparison. 5,000 or more words would be respectable amount.
And, of course, no HP story would be 'complete' without a romance pairing. In that regard, I'm casting my vote for a 'crackfic' pairing to break away from the all-consuming Harry/Hermione, /Ginny, /Daphne, harem, and *shudders violently* slash fics. Thus, my two primary votes for romance go out to Fleur and Tonks. Come on, you have to admit that the Tonks-romance has got a lot of potential in the 'cop vs. robber' love conflict. Especially if Harry's alterego self starts gaining some quite noteworthy infamy as a high-class assassin and no government likes having killers running about, 'indiscriminately' slaughtering the populace.
As you can likely guess after all that, I'm quite interested. Please try to update this story again soon, okay?
| AnimeVamp1997 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
* cooing excitedly at story* Dude, dude...this story is like a little baby I want to see grow and flourish into something amazing. Your first chapter has got me hooked, and pretty deeply at that. I'll admit that. In all the other stories I've read, the authors haven't involved other HP characters in H
| Mad about the Boro chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Awesome! You should work on inceasing the length for future chapters. Keep up the good work.