Reviews for Devil's Advocate
ItsSmilei chapter 26 . 9/3
I found this fic by accident when looking for a fanfic that included Naruto's gardening hobby and I honestly don't regret anything, definitely one of the best fics I've read so far, the plot is unique and interesting and the way it is written keeps you engaged. Never thought I would like Zetsu so much
Wonderful Imagination chapter 5 . 7/17
What a beautifully story and a wonderfully written chapter.
MaskedSharingan chapter 26 . 3/19
finally finished the story and gotta admit I loved each and every word of it.

thank you for such a good story!
Username6166 chapter 26 . 3/13
This is a masterpiece
Username6166 chapter 12 . 3/13
Pakura is best grill
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 12/18/2022
Fantástico l,
Un Maravilloso Comienzo
ghr501 chapter 26 . 11/1/2022
Holy Shit I loved this Story so much the Emotions Between Naruto and Ino I love it. I cried when Naruto learned what he became. Such a good story.
eo20000 chapter 4 . 10/25/2022
This is more of a reply to your authors note more than anything. I'm rather confused as to why you don't like stories that change Canon too much. I'm quite the opposite, stories that follow Canon too closely irritate me.
DerangedPirate chapter 6 . 8/25/2022
Why does he even need to wrap himself up in bandages and using ointment for a small undeep cut. He is a jinchuuriki. Most wounds would heal with speed that's visible to the eye, by the time he gets his scroll out the cut would have already stopped bleeding if not healed entirely.

In canon naruto stabbed himself with a kunai to get rid of his fear during the confrontation with the ''demon brothers of kirigakure'' you can literally see the wound closing up almost the moment he takes the kunai out. Kakashi even commented as much in canon. The cut you desribed is far less deep then the kunai he stabbed himself with in canon yet here he is somehow reliant on bandages and ointment to heal, either you nerfed him or forgot he is a jinchuuriki.
DerangedPirate chapter 3 . 8/25/2022
Why in the hell is he saying ''hafta'' instead of have to. It sounds ridiculous and looks out of place when reading it. He might not be the sharpest tool in the shed yet but there is no need to make him sound like a hillbilly with a speech-impediment.
Guest chapter 26 . 8/12/2022
Wow finally finished this, all in all I enjoyed it. I do wish we had some expanded scenes, especially for the romance aspects but I still managed to enjoy ìt.
Guest chapter 21 . 8/12/2022
The romance bits could have been expanded a bit more imo, bit overall it was still enjoyable.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/19/2022
This was a pretty good story. Read it in a day
Big ups for the ending
Nagj Aoe chapter 26 . 6/14/2022
Fucking amazing
Salty Six Paths chapter 9 . 6/4/2022
He’s a mini Eren lol
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