Bro i love this

This is a great fic. I love how Zetsu challenges Naruto's philosophy. And change in his behaviour is by far my most favorite type of fanfics.

Better than 90% of the garbage this site contains. Though, it doesn't suit me still. Too slow for my liking.

It's very good. Thanks for writing this

I must say that you are very good at writing fight scenes

Overall review

Just saying thank you so much for your fics they’ve also reignited a love of fanfic i always love seeing fanfic like yours take a familar world and completely retell it with a new form

Again you make a banger out of a relatively cool design but horrible character in the Akatsuki

First Kakazu then Zetsu and a very unique take on Roshi which I wish i could emulate

I will say that this is literally the edge of being in my favorite list

For anyone first picking this series up you’ll have an interesting ride with a very unique Zetsu though i’m certain the end if you reach the original one was amazing after that it’s a bit rushed since it’s more scatter of ideas but it’s worth a read

Also for anyone who EVER wanted a weak/non OP wood release Naruto this would be it

I found this fic by accident when looking for a fanfic that included Naruto's gardening hobby and I honestly don't regret anything, definitely one of the best fics I've read so far, the plot is unique and interesting and the way it is written keeps you engaged. Never thought I would like Zetsu so much

What a beautifully story and a wonderfully written chapter.

finally finished the story and gotta admit I loved each and every word of it.

thank you for such a good story!

This is a masterpiece

Pakura is best grill

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Un Maravilloso Comienzo

Holy Shit I loved this Story so much the Emotions Between Naruto and Ino I love it. I cried when Naruto learned what he became. Such a good story.

This is more of a reply to your authors note more than anything. I'm rather confused as to why you don't like stories that change Canon too much. I'm quite the opposite, stories that follow Canon too closely irritate me.

Why does he even need to wrap himself up in bandages and using ointment for a small undeep cut. He is a jinchuuriki. Most wounds would heal with speed that's visible to the eye, by the time he gets his scroll out the cut would have already stopped bleeding if not healed entirely.

In canon naruto stabbed himself with a kunai to get rid of his fear during the confrontation with the ''demon brothers of kirigakure'' you can literally see the wound closing up almost the moment he takes the kunai out. Kakashi even commented as much in canon. The cut you desribed is far less deep then the kunai he stabbed himself with in canon yet here he is somehow reliant on bandages and ointment to heal, either you nerfed him or forgot he is a jinchuuriki.