Reviews for Devil's Advocate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I found this fic by accident when looking for a fanfic that included Naruto's gardening hobby and I honestly don't regret anything, definitely one of the best fics I've read so far, the plot is unique and interesting and the way it is written keeps you engaged. Never thought I would like Zetsu so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a beautifully story and a wonderfully written chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally finished the story and gotta admit I loved each and every word of it. thank you for such a good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a masterpiece |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pakura is best grill |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantástico l, Un Maravilloso Comienzo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy Shit I loved this Story so much the Emotions Between Naruto and Ino I love it. I cried when Naruto learned what he became. Such a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is more of a reply to your authors note more than anything. I'm rather confused as to why you don't like stories that change Canon too much. I'm quite the opposite, stories that follow Canon too closely irritate me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does he even need to wrap himself up in bandages and using ointment for a small undeep cut. He is a jinchuuriki. Most wounds would heal with speed that's visible to the eye, by the time he gets his scroll out the cut would have already stopped bleeding if not healed entirely. In canon naruto stabbed himself with a kunai to get rid of his fear during the confrontation with the ''demon brothers of kirigakure'' you can literally see the wound closing up almost the moment he takes the kunai out. Kakashi even commented as much in canon. The cut you desribed is far less deep then the kunai he stabbed himself with in canon yet here he is somehow reliant on bandages and ointment to heal, either you nerfed him or forgot he is a jinchuuriki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why in the hell is he saying ''hafta'' instead of have to. It sounds ridiculous and looks out of place when reading it. He might not be the sharpest tool in the shed yet but there is no need to make him sound like a hillbilly with a speech-impediment. |
![]() ![]() Wow finally finished this, all in all I enjoyed it. I do wish we had some expanded scenes, especially for the romance aspects but I still managed to enjoy ìt. |
![]() ![]() The romance bits could have been expanded a bit more imo, bit overall it was still enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() This was a pretty good story. Read it in a day Big ups for the ending |
![]() ![]() Fucking amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() He’s a mini Eren lol |