|Reviews for Romeo and Julio|
| SexyBVirgo chapter 6 . 8/24/2013
I'm looking into this
| WolfishMoon chapter 5 . 6/1/2013
Pretty good! I do like the idea, I'm currently working on a yuri (girlxgirl) Romeo and Juliet. (also modernized). There are some wordage things that I'm not particularly fond of. With the prologue, because of how it was set up, I felt that it should have been more poetic. It doesn't have to be an Elizabethan sonnet, but free verse would have been nice. Anyway, on your nihongo (Japanese) it's not o denki desu ka, it's o genki desu ka. Also, judging by how both sensei and senpai say it when they shout it at us, shut up would be transliterated to urusai.
Anyway, cool story!
| SexyBVirgo chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
This was sooooo Good! I'm digging the prose here! And fast update Loving it!
| SexyBVirgo chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Great! Waiting for the next update
| SexyBVirgo chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
Hilarious...I love humor and coupled with RXJ...Delicious! Update soon
| SexyBVirgo chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Nice start...I have to admit Romeo and Juliet is one of my favorite stories
| Envyyyy chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I recommend you rewrite this ..
There're all commas and theres only ONE dot.
Which is damn annoying cause that's basically one more long line.