Reviews for Romeo and Julio
SexyBVirgo chapter 6 . 8/24/2013
I'm looking into this
WolfishMoon chapter 5 . 6/1/2013
Pretty good! I do like the idea, I'm currently working on a yuri (girlxgirl) Romeo and Juliet. (also modernized). There are some wordage things that I'm not particularly fond of. With the prologue, because of how it was set up, I felt that it should have been more poetic. It doesn't have to be an Elizabethan sonnet, but free verse would have been nice. Anyway, on your nihongo (Japanese) it's not o denki desu ka, it's o genki desu ka. Also, judging by how both sensei and senpai say it when they shout it at us, shut up would be transliterated to urusai.
Anyway, cool story!
SexyBVirgo chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
This was sooooo Good! I'm digging the prose here! And fast update Loving it!
SexyBVirgo chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Great! Waiting for the next update
SexyBVirgo chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
Hilarious...I love humor and coupled with RXJ...Delicious! Update soon
SexyBVirgo chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Nice start...I have to admit Romeo and Juliet is one of my favorite stories
Envyyyy chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I recommend you rewrite this ..
There're all commas and theres only ONE dot.
Which is damn annoying cause that's basically one more long line.