Reviews for Having Looked Too Long Upon The Sun
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
Your writing is so beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Happiness! Thank you!
Aidyl James chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
loujaxon chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Lovely! And as winter/snow is my favorite, I especially enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
anonymouth chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
/...and leant over to softly say she always thought Jadis deserved as much rescuing as the rest of them./

That's my favourite line. I feel the same, and it ties in so well with Miranda's character and this story.
Deanlu chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Wow! Unbelievable! This is an amazingly emotional complete picture. It was wonderful reading and seeing this within my minds eye! Thank you
sherryE chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Very nice
jigglypants chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
That was fantastic! Beautiful words that wonderfully conveyed the awe one feels when faced with the universe and its vastness and beauty. And I loved how you described that realization Miranda felt, experiencing a true moment of happiness 3 Compact story and yet you managed to paint a beautiful image packed with so much emotion. Thank you!
4568435164 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Oh wow. I'm so speechless! *_* That was... grandiose. From the philosophical take on physics and the slight dip into astronomy, to the sharp, palpable process of realisation in Miranda's head. Just... wow. I could see everything, feel everything... even taste the snow. I also head the bells on the reindeer and sleigh, even though you did not mention them. But they were there. That's how much you pulled me into the scene. Fantastic. I absolutely love it! Thank you for taking the prompt! :D