Reviews for The Mirror Of Erised (The not so clean version)
Yaoi-for-the-win chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
The last thing Harry says, "Call me Harry." The first thing I thought of was Call Me Maybe. Haha! I really think you should write a sequel! I wanna know EXACTLY what Draco sees. Yes, he sees Harry. But I want to know if it's just Harry standing there with Draco, or if they are snogging, or if they are having sex, or my favourite, are they standing there with children. A family. Please write more?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
the idea was brillant. it could promising if you widen the view and expanded the context of your story
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I loved commanding Harry! The smut was good too.
dragon fier 20 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
haha, nice. that was interesting. liked it, thought that it was funny that draco was being commanded around, but i thought it was cool
Angel801 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Ok, I would have LOVED 2 see more action instead of only like 2-3 paragraphs (of actual stuff. Not mirror) but I guess it wasn't bad. I do love the seme!Harry so it evens out a little;) nice
MechanicMasquerade chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This could certainly use a bit of work. It's a catching idea, but I just don't find it very engaging, that's just my opinion though :3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
that was crazy