|Reviews for On Being Female|
| earthROOTED1010 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
| doctorjay chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
Perfectly Pratchettarian prose. Love the asides and footnotes. Dwarfs are not big. On much.
| Dimac99 chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Oh, Carrot. Traditional Dwarf indeed! As a feminist, I must say I loved this :-)
| qui11 chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
This is some of the best Pratchettesque writing I've ever seen. Well done. Even the footnotes are correct!
| Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Oh my. I not quite sure how, but I ever even considered Carrot being a girl before. Oh my again.
| sliz225 chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
You tackled such a modern, complicated idea of a gender spectrum and made it fit perfectly in Discword. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Everyone was spectacularly in character, and your Pratchett voice was impeccable. Loved it.
| mistrali chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Your Pratchett voice is impeccable. Carrot was so endearingly and improbably... well, himself.
| diluvina black chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
I don't really like short stories but I almost laughed my head off with this one.
It's so carrot like :-) so like pratchett himself. Please do a sequel
| Sherlock Emrys chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Literally laughing out loud at the surrealness of that whole... conversion. That's the definition of awkward.
Excellently well written and perfectly in character too! Reads like a scene from a novel, despite the bizarreness of the concept. Should have been crack and wasnt. You win the internet XD
| ShinyKevin chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I've not read many Discworld fics that capture the essence of the books like this does. Pratchett's spirit runs right through this one - plus it was really true to the characters.
If I was going to be picky I would say you probably didn't need all the tagging and reactions et cetera - the speech alone would have carried the story a lot of the time - but even then none of it was badly written
I like it.
| Selina chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
That was very well written. The style, the complexity of text and above all the in-character-ness were very enjoyable. The line that caught my eye was "made a wrong, a right, a left, or a right bloody mess".
| mirrorballsymphony chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Still laughing :D but that is the sort of thing Carrot would do. Maybe write his declaration from Angua's point of view, that would be an interesting conversation...
| pennylehane chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Oh god, I'm in stitches. Can't see his happening, thank god, but it it did, this conversation would definitely follow. Hehe. Well done, mate.
| jenben chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
What an enjoyable story! It was nice to see you even included footnotes a la Pratchett. You certainly captured the essence of his writing well; the characters also seemed very true to form. The whole thing is quite clever. Thank you.