Reviews for Third Time's the Charm
chocovic-chu chapter 3 . 8/20/2014
Unexpected? Well, this reader expected something clear.
Confusing? Of course; even this reader didn't know what part was that confusing.
. . . So, this was a story in which the Master of Death had tasted Bruce's suicidal tendency, came stalking to observe (or to help?) but felt it's useless(?), gave Bruce a chance . . . then went away, but came once more when Bruce did it again?
Or was the Grim Reaper actually stalking the Hulk?
Thanks for sharing, though.
blackbloodywolf chapter 3 . 11/5/2013
more?
Lw117149 chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
nice I loved this
moonyrocks13 chapter 3 . 7/13/2013
do you know where i can find the pic you used for this story?
domsijohn chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
i wanted harry and bruce as mates
domsijohn chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
so hope they find a home
domsijohn chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
love harry
Yodes chapter 3 . 3/28/2013
Liked this. Interested in seeing more.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
interesting

strange ending. i don't get it?
yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 3 . 3/17/2013
if you were to end this story like that it would be okay because i have no idea how your going to continue this.
Angelfabeth chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
This is really good! A bit confusing but I still enjoyed reading this :)
Banner'sLove chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
hi, i thought the grammar was excellent! it's so nice to find someone who knows how to write :) anyways i found this story rather confusing, and i was rather afraid of harry. i'm not sure that his character was portrayed the right way. but all in all this story has left me feeling haunted
bebepantheon chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
This is pretty awesome! Will Banner continue to see Harry or is it one of those lifetime changes?
Hvshi Ninak Aya Neko chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
that was a sad ending. bruce is sorta friends with harry or at least likably acquainted and harry goes and transfers the hollows curse to him. that is sad. does that mean mr. banner won't get to die until he figures out how to pass the curse to someone else? will he ever see his sudo-friend again? did harry move on after passing that to him?

Goku
CosmicEssence chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
definitely confused...explain please! Got that Harry was Death/or Master of Death and that he was tryin to save Banner from a bullet to the head? um what was the last chapter all about and yeah actually just explain the whole thing please as i'm relly not sure at all!
Did love your Banner though and the near obvious evidence that something wasnt right about Harry, he had that whole creepy and grim reaper type of thing going on which really came across very well.
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