Reviews for Life on the Line
KiraWalrus chapter 4 . 6/21
I actually really liked this and it's really hard to find good, not cheesy, fanfiction. I know it's been like two years since you last updated but, I just want you to know that you should continue. Especially after that cliffhanger!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/22
Hades wearing a clown costume...!? ROLF
Guest chapter 4 . 8/4/2014
That was weird
Dead girl 2162 chapter 4 . 6/26/2014
Update soon, how could u possibly stop w/such a cliffe?
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2014
Guest chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
oh i like this chapter a lot. it didn't make sense that percy was like kind of okay with annabeth killing caspian but then you explained it more and talked about how percy thinks she did it quickly which is really good. but its pretty awkward that he heard lol
Christmascookie26 chapter 4 . 4/27/2014
NO! What happened? Did everyone at Camp die? Please don't let them die! Their too young! I think I'm gonna cry!
Christmascookie26 chapter 3 . 4/27/2014
ooohhh snap! Percy heard everything! I wonder if he'll be mad, sad, annoyed, guilty (as usual) or happy. Only one way to find out, on to the next chapter!
Christmascookie26 chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
Caspian I have a little advice for you,
1: Go learn karate
2: Watch your back
3: Sleep with one eye open
4: Pray to Zeus, Hera, and all the others.
Your probably wondering why I'm telling you this, The answer is obvious, Annabeth is coming for YOU!
But then again I don't care a bit about you for hurting Percy, so for all I care go die in a hole. But I will have a little sympathy, cause Annabeth will have no mercy on your soul! But hey, no pressure. :D
Christmascookie26 chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
:) Same ol percy
Catie chapter 4 . 4/22/2014
Who was talking?
Was it paint?
What warning?
Why were his nails tinted red?
Was it anabeth?
Or dead guy?
Or... Was it Joe or Carter?
Guest chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
Guest chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
Keep up the good work!:)
CalynnTheDeltoranOlympian chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
Not bad. :-) No recommendations this time.
hpjlover chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
Oh my gods! Im so freaked out I don't want anyone to be dead holy Poseidon! Anyways great job I really like this book the plot is interesting the characters are accurate and the diolouge is great keep up the good work PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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