Reviews for Just An Unorthodox Thief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh boy, I can only imagine what will happen with someone like Lupin in the war! Will Lupin be able to call upon the services of his fellow thieves when the going gets tough? I can see Goemon fighting Saber for instance, maybe Jigen blasting Gilgamesh's swords out of the air with his revolver too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inspector Zenigata should be one of the heroic spirit. He could be an archer or a rider. |
![]() ![]() O-o-o-okay... definitely not the Servant I would have expected to be summoned EVER. But this intrigues me greatly. I do wonder how Lupin would react to the dark tone of Fate/Zero though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Insert Gilgamesh's shut up and take my money gif.* Me: will someone will lose some, if not all, of their wealth? Odin: What do you think, NEET? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh you! Just couldn't wait, huh? Well, it's understandable when the fic has such potential. Much wonderful times shall be had, and a congradulate you for the beautifully executed introductory chapter. You must feel really good about this idea seeing how well the dialogue just seemed to flow, and this intro is definitely the hook that will make people stop and read! Keep up the momenteum (Don't ignore Stay Away tho) and show us just how far you can go with this! Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work in this fic and your others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh holy shit...Gilgamesh...hide your glorius golden ass...he may steal that too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice way of relating the mask to Lupin |
![]() ![]() ![]() For original Noble Phantasms, here are some that would work for Lupin I believe. -Stealth Coat: A coat that makes the wearer invisible and has a repulsion field. -1000 Faces Mask: A mask that can change it's appearance to someone else's at the wearers leisure along with their voice and manner of speaking. ArcherJigen RiderFujiko SaberGoemon You have to admit, that with Lupin's luck, his friends would be the other servants. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't even know you were the author of this fic until I got to the end! The only thing I needed to know to read this was Lupin being summoned. Very nice by the way! Good Luck in Life and Writing! Farmer Kyle |
![]() ![]() ![]() i haven't read this yet but when i read the summary i just had to post thank you for making a crossover like i honestly don't get why nobody hasn't done one before so once again just thank you for making this crossover and i hope you continue it and it will be a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() good start. |