|Reviews for That One Boy's Twin|
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/17/2015
I know this is what, 2 yeas old?
But the fluffiness made me just HAVE to comment. Th ending almost made me cry (ALMOST)
And the games being called Maria Cart and First Fantasy, I almost died laughing (yeah I'm weird) Thanks for a good romance, though I wish there was more Ness/Lucas (My favorite pairing) Anyway,enough ranting. Byez :D
| Andrew chapter 7 . 7/30/2015
You successfully made me cry. :(
| Anon chapter 7 . 7/9/2015
Please...Make more of this! pleasee!
| bunnylover15 chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
Yes, u made me cry _ u accomplished ur mission. lol
| Yahya Jammeh chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
OMG you're such a great writer! Claus and Ninten are so cute together!
| TheMysticalQ chapter 7 . 5/18/2013
*Looks at the few tears that came out* YOU... Have all my love and respect as an author. I loved it! Hope to see more from you soon.
| iRoll chapter 7 . 5/17/2013
I luv this nish!
| STR4WB3RRY-M1LKSH4K3 chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
You made me cry... Heh. I liked the ending. *wipes tears*
| TheEpicChuggaaconroy chapter 7 . 5/14/2013
I love how this storys ending focused more on the summer and car move while TOB focused on the aftermath of Leila and her "reign". I can't wait till you do more writing magic later.
| Eri Shimizu chapter 7 . 5/13/2013
Long time no read you Lordlenne .. Hi! finally encourage me to make an account on this page so I can now leave my review in a best way I guess (yes, I'm the same crazy called just Eri). I loved this chapter, you have accomplished your mission and made me take several tears as I read your story. Ultimately Claus is many steps ahead of Lucas regarding the level of confidence (perversion) he have with Ninten, I really like that. I got a few laughs when Claus was giving "advice" to his brother, I think actually wanted to help Ness (who knows and maybe he is doing a favor to his future brother). I can't help save the comment: I LOVE the tsundere side of Claus, is what I love most about him. I admit that in that sense I am a bit tsundere too, but he's just beautiful.
I hope in the test you have will go with the best possible results, no doubt you could pass this obstacle. Lordlenne, I wish you the maximum of luck from the bottom of my heart. Cheer up! Go, Lenne, Go! Ganbatte kudasai nee! Fighting! (yeah, my friki side). Anyways, I hope to read you soon and that in its good news tells us that you approved the test. In any case, I'm sure Luke is supporting you also like all his fans around the world. All we want you on our way! GOOD LUCK and Take care of yourself
| Eri chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
Sorry for taking so long to leave a comment! Even if you do not believe me, college is consuming me and so despite having read some time ago I do not keep time to comment. I loved from start to finish, most of all the part where Claus was nervous because he had to undress Ninten or when he finally got his first kiss to Ninten! was just so beautiful and tender I had to stifle a scream of joy. I love knowing that her relationship with Luke going great (I think he liked on what you buy). I hope to read it soon in this wonderful story
| TheMysticalQ chapter 6 . 4/14/2013
That was beautiful. Clausy and Ninten getting caught like that, and Ninten's dad being totally fine with it. Just lock the door next time, Ninny. Just lock the door. Would have loved to see Ninten's dad threaten Claus with the usual 'hurt my son and die' routine, but cop style.
| TheEpicChuggaaconroy chapter 6 . 4/10/2013
Wow, this explained quite a bit about TOB, good work man.
| Motherlote chapter 6 . 4/10/2013
Aw, could the kissing part have been any more cute?
Can't wait for next chapter
| Joxas chapter 6 . 4/7/2013
OwO i love reading both versions of this story. :)