Reviews for A Demon's Mate
WolfDaemon2389 chapter 4 . 6/17
Bellatrix said it last chapter.
bearfan23 chapter 8 . 5/20
oh oh oh make ron the overprotective big brother wanting nothing more than to kill cedric. maybe give harry an angel to compliment tommy boys demon?
TenderNighshade chapter 8 . 4/22
OMG PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS! How could you end it like this? How dare you?! I am at shock, and I don't even know what the freak to say right now! One thing I do know now that I've passed a bit of my freak out. I hope that Diggory asshole goes down. Like for real? How the freak did they end up together in the first place?! For the first time ever I really hope you castrate him. I have freakers like him that think they can dominate but when they meet a real man they're ready to crap themselves or are so full of themselves they don't realize they're about to die. Please, please, PLEASE make sure that ass pays! That effing man-whore! I don't care who the red-headed slut is, but I hope she gets a reality check. NEWS FLASH on Hogwarts Live! Muahahahahaha! That's it, I blame you for getting me hyper, I've always been too sensitive for my own good and now I'm ranting...
TenderNighshade chapter 7 . 4/22
HA! I can't wait to read about Tom's reaction to finding out the one of his obsession and the 'golden boy' that he's been wondering about are the same person. Your words are like art, I have to point that out if you haven't figured it out yourself already. One sentence brings to life an image, and the references between being a demon and an angel is amazing. Only some people can grasp that passionate form of writing and blow people away with it. I think you just might have it. It's ironic though that the demon has an angel, when demons used to be angels themselves. Will Harry remain to be an angel, or will he be too corrupt by Tom and become a demon? Yea, that's my question for now.
TenderNighshade chapter 6 . 4/22
You intrigue me immensely at the moment. You really do. Cedric is a total douche, and I can't wait for the scene when he is torn the fudge up. Hmmm...fudge. Stupid chocolate cravings, I swear they pop out of nowhere! Any-who, I am also excited to see how the relationship will come to be between Tom & Harry. They make quite the pair. Will the Dursley's get their just deserts? Will Dumbledore since there's no DOUBT that he's a manipulative ass? In this story anyway since it depends on the writer how the reader perceives their character's true selves in their view. That's it, you're a miss. At first I'm wondering between, but with this chapter and the way you describe you & your cousin bonding, your a miss. If you're a mister then forgive me, but you as of right now are a miss in my mind.
TenderNighshade chapter 5 . 4/22
Before I comment, sorry for my babbling...I drift off into those without realizing until I see I've written more than I meant to. I LOVE sassy and smart ass Harry! Oh darn I blame you immensely if I go into a fangirl mode! Their first meet is interesting I have to give you that. That sudden craving of the flesh and the obsessiveness that appears at the same time is a delicate twist in one's mentality that most can't seem to get right, so I have to give you props for vividly painting that picture without going crazy with so many words. Harry's darkness, I'm curious to see where that comes from. After all, no one is born dark, it's something that comes to be in the battle of nature vs. nurture along with that person's will power.
TenderNighshade chapter 4 . 4/22
You know you're really something mister? Or is it miss? I don't bother checking the author's page until I'm done reading their work. So I think you could be the mister who around people you're average while in private you're your creepy mental self...or you could be a badass miss with an odd dark side that isn't usual since most miss's that I've met suck at having a dark side. Mine is still developing xP Any-who, your work is interesting! Perverse obviously since sadly some relatives are stuck up sometimes with their views and I think some of that is rubbing off a bit...I think I need a brain wash. This might be my 1st review but it's not the last :D Ur stuck with me until I finish reading this.
SweetCandyLove18 chapter 8 . 1/21
love it :)
Lavonya chapter 4 . 7/22/2014
Haaaaahaaaaaaahaaaaaaahaaaaaaahaaaaaa... Poor guy...
Lavonya chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
"He's baaaack." Nice!
Lavonya chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Interesting...
QueenLyssa chapter 8 . 7/6/2014
Nooooo! Cedric must die! and by Harry's hand!
Charlie0925 chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
I am so in love with the start of this fic and the amazing characters you have created here, awesome writing hun! Please, please, please come back to this fic and update it when you have the chance, it's far too good of aa story not to finish! ;o)
DarkDeathDragonQueen chapter 8 . 5/21/2014
Hmm...*smirks evily* Someone's **** is going to be blown off*cackle madly* hahaha * hums tune of Cedric's torture soon to come* Great job with the story!*smirk turns into wide grin* Can't wait for next chapter. *continues to hum*
Bashirisuku chapter 8 . 2/11/2014
will you eventually kill cedric off?
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